In italienischer Sprache mit deutschen und englischen Übertiteln
In Italian with German and English surtitles
#OthElokuu
Victor Hugo - Excerpt from William Shakespeare
Translated by Sandra Dermark
22nd of August, MMXXIII
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Who or what is Othello? A beautiful fatal figure! Othello is the darkness of night. This darkness loves the light of day. That is why the Moor loves the fair Desdemona. She is the light and the madness of Othello. How easy it is for him to be jealous! Othello is great, august, he has for an entourage bravery in battle, banners, clangour, fame, glory, and the splendour of one hundred battles... But his skin is dark. And how easy it is for the hero to become a savage monster! How easy for darkness and death to understand one another!
By the side of Othello, the darkness of night, we have Iago, who is Evil. Evil is another form of darkness. The night is only the darkness of Earth, but Evil IS the darkness of the spirit. What darkness that which is sired by wickedness and lies! Isn't it the same to let black ink flow on the page or to let black treachery course through one's veins? Whoever has seen pretenses and wickedness from up close knows. One walks carefully with a liar. Pour out hypocrisy at the crack of dawn, and you will surely blot out the Sun. That has happened to God with corruption of the various Churches.
Iago, by Othello's side, is the chasm by the slippery slope. "Here," whispers the snare set to blindness. The wicked shows the path to the black. Deception is in charge of giving the light that fails to darkness. Jealousy has lies for pathfinders. What a terrible spectacle to behold the dark Othello and the traitor Iago fighting whiteness and purity! The two incarnations of the eclipse conspire, one of them roaring and the other smiling, in order to attain the tragic disappearance of the light.
Othello is the darkness of night. Probe these depths. Being the darkness of night and wanting to kill, what is his weapon of choice? Poison, morningstar, axe, blade? No, it's the PILLOW. To kill is to put to sleep. Maybe Shakespeare himself was not aware of what he did. Such IS the force and such the reality of character types, that their creator gets carried away by them. And thus, Desdemona, united to the darkness-man, dies stifled by the pillow in which she received both his first kiss and her last dying breath.
Esta saga es una serie de traducciones, originalmente manuscritas en mi adolescencia, que se me ocurrieron en Gröna Lund, el parque de atracciones de Estocolmo. Vedlas como una presentación de Miguel Bosé al público sueco.
De här översättningarna var ursprungligen handskrivna i mina tonår och jag kom på dem på Gröna Lund i Stockholm. Se dem som en inledning i Miguel Bosé för svenska folket.
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TRIANA
(Sevilla)
Av Miguel Bosé
Översatt från spanskan av Sandra Dermark
i sina tonår på Gröna Lund
Reviserat den 6 augusti 2023
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Julimåne lyser klart,
kylig klinga dras ut snart,
svarta ögon, vacker mö,
gift som får mig att dö!
Svartsjukt hjärta, sydländsk själ,
solfjäder av rött blod färgad väl,
trogen ödet, fall, du mö,
gift som får mig att dö!
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Det hjärta som ända hit anlänt
har ej återvänt, Triana...
Jag blev förälskad med sådan passion,
utan någon pardon, Triana...
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Ensam lämnad, ensamhet,
spelar den melodin du vet...
En förtrollning drabbar dig i år
och en enda tår...
Apelsinblom i gryningen
för att avslöja sanningen...
Klingan sviktar, tung i sinn...
men den tränger in...
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Jag ska förtälja för gryningen
hur jag älskade, Triana...
Kanalje, åh! Dör jag för din skull,
Var ditt hjärtegull, Triana...
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Sjunga få... Yra liksom få...
Känna nöjd var dolkstöt full av fröjd!
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Det hjärta som ända hit anlänt
har ej återvänt, Triana...
Jag blev förälskad med sådan passion,
utan någon pardon, Triana...
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Jag ska förtälja för gryningen
hur jag älskade, Triana...
Kanalje, åh! Dör jag för din skull,
Var ditt hjärtegull, Triana...
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Du ska bli indränkt i gods och guld,
bli förförd, så huld, Triana...
Ni är min drottning, jag kavaljer,
som nu livet ger, Triana...
Now on to compare and contrast To Die Upon a Kiss with my own unofficial fanfic/playlist retelling, Daily Beauty...
Overview of my own genderflipped Othello postmodern AU.
AURÈLE (Othello)
Age: 28
Body Type: T (Physically fit, war orphan and child soldier)
Ethnic Group: Yoruba
Star Sign: Scorpio
Tutelar Deity: Ares (Ogun)
Siblings: None
Hair colour: raven, tips dyed crimson
Eye colour: black
Skin colour: latte or milk chocolate
Desmond & Cathy (Ruslana is below)
DESMOND (Desdemona)
Age: 25
Body Type: I
Ethnic Group: Celtic
Star Sign: Libra
Tutelar Deity: Hephaestus
Siblings: None
Hair colour: ash blond
Eye colour: green
Skin colour: white rosy
Childhood Friends with:
CATHERINE "CATHY" (Cassio)
Age: 25
Body Type: 8 (moderately fit nerd/Speculative Fiction Geek)
Ethnic Group: Celtic
Star Sign: Aquarius
Tutelar Deity: Hera
Siblings: None
Hair colour: strawberry/Titian blond
Eye colour: honey
Skin colour: white with freckles
Yara (Iara), Emílio, & Branca - the de Souza siblings (orphans after a tram accident/terrorist attack)
EMÍLIO (Emilia)
Age: 29
Body Type: T
Ethnic Group: Mixed
Star Sign: Virgo
Tutelar Deity: Demeter (Oshun)
Siblings: Yara and Branca (eldest brother)
Hair colour: raven
Eye colour: black
Skin colour: latte macchiato
YARA/IARA (Iago)
Age: 25
Body Type: I
Ethnic Group: Mixed
Star Sign: Gemini
Tutelar Deity: Apollo (Eshu)
Siblings: Emílio and Branca (middle sister)
Hair colour: raven, tips dyed platinum
Eye colour: black
Skin colour: latte macchiato
BRANCA (Bianca)
Age: 18
Body Type: 8 (naturally attractive, without any bodily enhancements)
Ethnic Group: Mixed
Star Sign: Leo
Tutelar Deity: Zeus (Shango)
Siblings: Emílio and Yara (youngest sister)
Hair colour: raven, tips dyed rainbow
Eye colour: black
Skin colour: latte macchiato
RUSLANA (Roderigo)
Age: 20
Body Type: 0/8 (spoiled/fit)
Ethnic Group: Slavic
Star Sign: Cancer
Tutelar Deity: Hermes
Siblings: None
Hair colour: wheat blond, tips dyed pink
Eye colour: icy blue
Skin colour: rosy
Sensei and the setting - inspiration from my all-female self-defense classes
The main setting is an all-female self-defense class in a coastal urban area inspired by Valencia, which serves as the home of the whole cast.
The themes of body image and coming out in my retelling - there's nothing wrong with looking or loving this way; in fact these themes outweigh race in my fic. This is related to "Beauty-and-the-Beast" type of tales (even those where the Beast is female and the Beau is male, or queer retellings), and the issue of outer vs. inner beauty - see below. The relationship can only blossom if both partners put inner before outer beauty and love one another warts and all (after all, we decorate evergreen conifers, not rosebushes, for Christmas!); inner beauty is the "daily beauty" in my title and Cathy & Branca bond over British comedy (Fawlty Towers, Blackadder, Monty Python...); as Desmond & Aurèle do over absent parents...
Outer Beauty vs. Inner Beauty (ie intelligence, wit, wisdom, kindness, sense of humour... inner beauty is the "daily beauty" in my title!). Most versions of Beauty and the Beast have, as counterpoint to the princely Beast, a brother-in-law or a suitor (if she is an only child, like Gaston in the animated musical) who is physically attractive yet dimwitted and shallow and in love with himself. Long story short a narcissist. //// Both Ruslana and Aurèle fear that they fit this character stereotype and are not acknowlegded for their depths (both suffer trauma because Aurèle was a child soldier in a revolution; Ruslana is a mafia clan heiress)...
Ruslana is manipulated by Yara because of Ruslana's insecurities about her own body image and the fact that she sees herself as a whale or hippo and that she feels Desmond will not like her and will prefer a girl who is more fit (even if darker like Aurèle)... in the end it proves her downfall --- MORE ON RUSLANA AND HER POISONING SHOVED DOWN THE BRIDGE LATER ON!!!!
In the meantime Cathy comes out with Branca and accepts herself as what she is, instead of what her mum and dad want her to be burning calories and striving to become... partly 'cause her new ladylove accepts her warts and all!!! and Cathy is all she has left with Emílio hospitalised in the ER and Yara on the lam... so Daily Beauty was all about Cathy's and Branca's daily beauty and not anyone else's... awwwww awwwww awwwww awwww awwww awwwww awwww caught in a queer romance (anyone else?)...
OBSERVE THE MASTER OF THE STRINGS!!! Yara as Spider in the (WW)Web and the weight of social media is real in making both Aurèle and (nearly) Branca embrace the scandal of Desmond and Cathy being in allegedly a carnal relationship... in our days, the element of the social network, added to the gris-gris (charm which replaces the handkerchief in this version), was something that did not exist in the seventeenth century and that adds more complexity to this Othello retelling. If everyone in an online peer group is convinced from photos uploaded on social media that Desmond and Cathy are together, what a Pandora's Box is opened for everyone (even the childhood friends and alleged "lovers" question their relationship at one point).... YARA is a master user of social media, with the rest of the cast as "insects" on her WWWeb.
#OthElokuu
[...] the moment when Othello stands over the sleeping Desdemona, intending to kill her and yet admiring her beauty. Othello kisses Desdemona as she sleeps and adds: "Be thus when thou art dead, and I will kill thee / and love thee after (5.2.18-19)." And he does kiss her exquisite corpse: "I kissed thee ere I killed thee; no way but this, / killing myself, to die upon a kiss (5.2.358-59)." His necrophilia is much like that of the prince charming in "Snow White" (and "Sleeping Beauty").
While praise of female beauty as red and white (for Caucasian standards) is of course conventional, Shakespeare may have consistently remembered the "snow white and blood/rose red" formula when writing these scenes of a man admiring an unconscious young woman. Othello compares Desdemona's life to a rose, and says: "Yet I'll not shed her blood /nor scar that whiter skin of hers than snow (5.2.13, 3-4).
Othello is a persecuted heroine story, and, like the similar folktales, it is all about jealousy. Jealousy, we see, always tends towards death, making the beloved an unmoving, beautiful, possessable objects.
These references to the "Snow White" folktales allow Shakespeare to meditate on the single nature of jealousy in all of its guises: jealousy over beauty, over inheritance, over sexual possession, and over political power. In Othello, Iago manifests the connection between different forms of jealousy. He wants the promotion that Othello has bestowed on Cassio. Iago also claims to want Desdemona for himself, and to believe that both Cassio and Othello have slept with his wife. One of his most haunting lies, moreover, returns us to the folktale villainess's competition over beauty (recalling the wicked queen's obsession with being "fairest of them all"). Iago says of Cassio, "He hath a daily beauty in his life / that makes me ugly (5.1.19-20)."