Mostrando entradas con la etiqueta aritsar au. Mostrar todas las entradas
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lunes, 5 de diciembre de 2022

ARITSAR HAS MADE IT TO SPAIN!!!

Raybearer, now translated and titled Radiante, I saw it in bookshops here in Spain!! Bienvenides a Aritsar, todes quienes no lo conocéis (y quienes queréis explorar este mundo un poco antes de lanzaros, haced clic en mis etiquetas Aritsar y Aritsar AU aquí abajo en este post para tener una ligera idea)...

 


Now... How does one localize a rich world of Counterpart Cultures as Aritsar, the Arit Empire, as Alfaguara has done this winter for us here in Spain? For the aspiring Multilingual ficcer, here is a little glossary (terms like isoken or Ileyoba or Nontes or Biraslov are exotic enough to need no localization, but others don't):

GIFTS AND ENDOWED PEOPLE / DONES Y DOTADES

Ray: Rayo

Raybearer: Radiante

Hallow: Gracia

Hallowed: Agraciada/Agraciado 

Council: Consejo 

Redemptor: Redentor/a


PLACES / LUGARES

Blessid Valley: Valle Blessid

Songland: Songland

Yorua Keep: fortaleza Yorua

Yorua Village: aldea Yorua

Children's Palace: Palacio Infantil


GODS / DIOSES

Warlord Fire: Fuego, señor de la guerra

Am / Storyteller: Soy / Fabulador

Water (goddess): Agua 


COUNCIL TITLES / TÍTULOS DEL CONSEJO

High Priestess: suprema sacerdotisa

High Lord/Lady General: supremx general

High Lord/Lady Magus: supremx hechicerx

High Lord/Lady Ambassador: señor/dama supremx embajadorx

High Lord/Lady Archdeacon: archidiáconx supremx

High Lord/Lady of Harvests: señor/dama supremx de las cosechas

High Lord/Lady Judge: juez supremx

High Lord/Lady of Castles: señor/dama supremx de los castillos

High Lord/Lady Laureate: señor/dama supremx laureadx

High Lord/Lady Treasurer: señor/dama supremx de tesorería

High Lord/Lady of Husbandry: señor/dama supremx de ganadería 






Furthermore, Netflix will soon adapt the Aritsar duology to the streaming screen! They already did A Series of Unfortunate Events, A Tale Dark and Grimm, and the first installment in The School of Good and Evil, so a vibrant universe of counterpart cultures like Aritsar would be perfect to turn into a streaming series, right?


sábado, 8 de enero de 2022

MORE ON ARITSAR (FROM REDEMPTOR)

SOME MEWISH HISTORY...

 “I’m,” he mumbled, “I’m called Fergus. I was born in Faye’s Crossing. Far north, in Mewe.”

“Who do you work for? Who are your people?”

The boy shook his head slowly. “My parents . . . went away. No. They died in battle. At Gaelinagh.”

“Gaelinagh?” I echoed the foreign word, and battle records raced through my memories. “But that’s impossible. The Battle of Gaelinagh was a Mewish civil war, and they haven’t had one of those in centuries. Not since—”

Disbelief stole the words in my throat.

Peace had been established in Mewe five hundred years ago—during the reign of Emperor Enoba. Back when Redemptors were born all over the continent, and not just in Songland.

The Mewish child was sinking before my eyes. The ground was—was swallowing him. My fingers grasped at his clammy pale skin, but my Hallow found nothing—only cold emptiness.

Healers traditionally used kuso-kuso, the blossoms draping

the suite walls, as a dreaming aid. But Thérèse altered the

plant to heighten our senses. The scent extended the power of

our Ray bond, allowing my siblings to move through the suite

in a haze of constant intimacy, even when rooms apart.

But the Imperial Suite of An-Ileyoba boasted twelve

pristine—and separate—bedchambers. They were arranged in

a circle, with a hallway on the outer perimeter and an airy

salon in the center. Past Anointed Ones, it seemed, had

strengthened their Ray bond with age, rendering group

slumber unnecessary. But thanks to Olugbade’s untimely death

. . . our Ray bond was less than five years old. We were the

youngest Anointed Ones to rule in Arit history.

Thérèse had solved the problem with kuso-kuso vines,

heightening our connection and keeping council sickness at

bay. Still, out of habit, we often crowded three or more to a

bed . . . and some of my siblings were enjoying the benefits of

our newfound privacy more than others.

“It’s not what it looks like,” 

“The Kunleo

family claimed nearly every massive natural resource on the

continent after establishing the empire. Quarries, river mills,

lumber farms. Why do you think the Imperial Treasury never runs dry? The Kunleos generate so much wealth from raw

resources, they barely even touch their revenue from taxes.”

“Oh.” My head spun. “But don’t all those places have

workers? Villages that depend on them? How are Dayo and I

supposed to keep track of them all?”

“You don’t,” Mayazatyl said cheerily. “Nobles manage the

mills and quarries for you. Taking a cut for their trouble, of

course. The crown only interferes when nobles need

reinforcements.”

“Reinforcements?”

“Muscle.” She grinned. “Like war buffalo.”

When I stumbled up a narrow staircase to the suite’s elevated

garden, night air enveloped me in a citrus-scented balm. Herb

beds, dwarf palms, and potted fruit trees lined the flat

sandstone roof, nestled prettily between the golden palace

domes. My council sister Thérèse of Nontes stood swaying

among the fragrant vines of kuso-kuso. Moonlight bleached

her frizzy yellow hair as her Hallow forced waxy kuso-kuso

leaves to sprout, flower, wilt, and sprout again, over and over

until they achieved her prim standard of perfection. 

..... Call-and-response sung at royal events:

Of what use—Tell us!

Of what use is an empty throne?

We have found someone worthy—Have you found someone?

Aheh, Kunleo is worthy to fill it—Yes, Kunleo is worthy to

fill it.

....

AND HERE IS CHAPTER 6, WHERE WE MEET ALL THE REALM RULERS OR VASSAL RULERS OF ARITSAR!!! THIS WILL COME IN HANDY FOR MY AUS...

My banquet table fell into chaos. Some of the rulers stood, upsetting their chalices and clutching their temples as if to claw the vision out. I winced. It had been a risk, invading their minds like that. It was unlikely they would forgive me for it soon—but forcing the memory of Ebujo had been the quickest way to get my point across.

“This could be the fate of the entire continent,” I said over their indignant cries. “I had to make you see. Please sit down. I—”

They clamored over me, some dignitaries threatening to leave the banquet then and there. No. My palms sweated. They couldn’t leave; this was my only chance to save Aritsar. To prevent thousands of child sacrifices. Millions. Desperation sped my heartbeat, and heat rose in my chest. When I spoke again, my voice sounded lower, and the echo-stone brought my altered voice to a bellow.

“Please,”I thundered. “Sit. Down.”

Beneath my necklace of cowrie shells, the obabirin mask seared like a coal. For a moment, I could have sworn the mask glowed.

Then as if in a trance, every Arit ruler lowered to their seat cushions, features startled and mouths slack. When the heat receded from me and my pulse returned to normal, they still sat, stunned as though they had just awoken from a strange, powerful dream.

I was as surprised as they were. Only the dignitaries from Songland continued to stand, seemingly unfazed by whatever had subdued the other monarchs.

“Please,” I said again, dropping the bass from my voice. The Songlander royals scowled . . . but after exchanging a wary glance, voluntarily sat back down with the others.

“Thank you,” I said shakily, feeling as dazed as my guests looked. “I was . . . just trying to convey the danger. If monsters pour from the Oruku Breach, not only will they kill us, they’ll also turn our realms against each other, just like at Ebujo. The empire could splinter overnight, leaving us just as weak as we were five hundred years ago. I think—If we don’t form a council to appease the abiku—all of Aritsar could be at risk.”

Though calm now, the Arit rulers had clearly not recovered from my mental invasion. Some squinted into their chalices, as though they might have been drugged. A few shot pleading glances at Kirah, making the sign of the Pelican (the Arit equivalent of the sign of the cross).

“You have nothing to fear from the empress,” Kirah assured them, using her lofty High Priestess voice. She gestured a blessing over the table. “The empress’s warning was a gift.”

“Of course it was,” Dayo announced. “We have only two years to avoid the fate of Ebujo. And so,” he said, standing and taking my hand in solidarity. “The Empress Redemptor and I would like to extend an invitation: Stay in Oluwan (the capital region). All of you.”

“Not indefinitely,” I added quickly. “But we can’t risk too much lodestone travel. You need only stay until—”

Until you love me and bind your minds to me for life.

“Until you’ve tried to join my council,” I finished lamely. “And the fate of the empire is secured. We would house you all in the utmost comfort, compliments of the crown. High Lord General Sanjeet has seen personally to each villa’s safety.” I steeled my shoulders. “We open the floor for questions.”

Cacophony from wall to wall. The rulers and their retinues roared over one another, shaking their heads and gesturing in protests that upset platters and toppled chalices.

Calmly, Ai Ling joined me on the echo-stone and said, “It would be better, perhaps, if questions were posed one at a time.”

The Hallowed suggestion fell on the room like a thick mudcloth blanket. A few stubborn-minded people still muttered at their seats, but most hushed at Ai Ling’s request, looking vaguely ashamed of themselves.

First to speak was King Helius of Sparti, a graying man with sea-whipped skin. Curling chest hair bristled around a gold-edged chiton. “With all due respect, Your Imperial Majesties,” he sputtered, “whether or not we are willing to try to love the empress is immaterial. Suppose you succeed. What then? We live in Oluwan forever, stuck to her side, neglecting our own countries? Sacred Oceans—my absence in this past month alone has stalled the launch of several ships! Sparti’s trade will grind to a halt, and our fisheries won’t be far behind.”

The other rulers grunted in agreement, and the rumble threatened to return.

“We have a plan for that,” Ai Ling piped up, digging in her pocket and placing a sachet of dried leaves on the table. The smell hit me instantly, sharp and heady.

“The kuso-kuso herb?” asked Queen Danai of Swana. Silvery white locs shone in intricate patterns on her head, and she appraised Ai Ling with keen eyes. “But that is a dreaming aid. How will that help us?”

Ai Ling smiled mysteriously. “It’s true—in some regions of Aritsar, entire villages inhale kuso-kuso smoke together, allowing for communal dreaming. But our council has been experimenting with ways to send messages across long distances, improving communication between realms.” She paused for effect. “Turns out, you don’t have to inhale kuso-kuso in the same room to dream together. If two or more strongly bonded individuals dream at the same time . . . their minds unite. Wherever they are. The dreams are as potent as speaking in person, alleviating council sickness through the Ray.”

Dayo beamed at Ai Ling, and she colored. “It’s brilliant,” he said. “Once each monarch is anointed, they won’t even have to stay in Oluwan. So Tarisai’s new council can commune anytime, anywhere.”

Impressed voices rippled down the table. Then Crown Princess Min Ja of Songland’s alto cut through the others, smooth and piercing. “What I don’t understand,” she said, “is what any of this has to do with Songland.”

I tried not to quail beneath her stare. Min Ja seemed to glow in her traditional Songlander attire—a full skirt and matching jacket of crisp pastel silks, blues and whites icy against her golden skin. She had the satiny black hair and fine bone structure of her younger brother, Woo In, and shared the same glint in her jaded dark eyes. The last time I had seen that expression—bristling grief masked by anger—Woo In had been holding a knife to my mother’s cheek, unaware of the poison seeping into her bloodstream.

Tread lightly, Kirah Ray-spoke to me.

I tensed at the warning. You’ve been getting to know the queen and the princess, right? What should I know?

Kirah bit her lip. Queen Hye Sun hasn’t been the same since her son Woo In disappeared. She’s a little better, now that she knows he’s alive—but they say she’s still a husk of her former glory. And Min Ja is— Kirah sucked in a breath. . . . a puzzle. She’s barely ten years older than us. Yet she’s the sole heir to the Songlander throne. Even over Woo In.

That’s weird, commented Dayo, cocking his head. Don’t Songlander dynasties usually pass from father to son? They don’t even include daughters in their genealogies. Hye Sun only ruled as a widow regent. Why would the throne go to Min Ja instead of Woo In?

Woo In’s a Redemptor, I pointed out. Perhaps that made Hye Sun nervous.

Ai Ling said: Woo In wasn’t Hye Sun’s first male child.

An ominous chill pricked at my neck. He wasn’t?

There were seven total, Ai Ling continued to Ray-speak, after an unsettled pause. Seven healthy sons, all older than Min Ja and Woo In. But something happened. None of my spies in Songland can be sure, but . . . it’s widely spoken that when she was younger, Min Ja murdered her own brothers.

The crown princess of Songland appeared to be relishing the silence. She drew a gold-tipped nail around the rim of her chalice, causing a low, resonant whistle. At last she smiled tightly and said, “Your empire admitted to massacring thousands of Songlander children. Your council has hurried to facilitate reparations,” she acknowledged, nodding at Ai Ling and Kirah. “A process that I intend to be painful, especially to Aritsar’s bottomless treasury. But as far as I’m concerned, our business ends there. The abiku asked you to form a council of Arit rulers. Songland is not part of the Arit empire, nor shall it ever be. So why,” she asked with that cold, coy contempt, “are we here?”

“You are here,” I replied, “because your people have gone centuries without a voice on the continent. I won’t pressure you to join the empire. I won’t try to rule you. But it’s time Songland had a seat at the table.”

Min Ja examined me for several moments, her expression inscrutable. “How noble,” she monotoned. “Unfortunately, I don’t believe in heroines. Not even pretty ones, who go on suicidal joyrides across Aritsar on giant magical leopards. How do I know this isn’t just another Kunleo ruse? A trick to gain control of my people again.”

“I’ll have no power over Her Majesty.” I nodded shyly at the old Queen Hye Sun, who blinked back at me with rheumy, absent eyes. “And she can make sure of that. If the queen joins my council, after all, we’ll be bonded in mind and body. She’ll have access to my thoughts. My dreams. I couldn’t keep secrets from her—not easily, anyway.”

Min Ja appraised me severely, until the beautiful young woman beside her whispered in her ear. She looked Min Ja’s age, with the fat figure coveted by Oluwani court ladies. Brown eyes twinkled over floral lace, which masked the bottom half of her full, flushed face. As the woman spoke, Min Ja looked chastened, eyeing her companion with annoyed vulnerability. When the woman gestured, I blinked in surprise. Pink sleeves fell back to reveal amputated arms, severed and scarred over just below the elbow.

That’s Da Seo, Ai Ling Ray-spoke. The princess’s consort. Lady Da Seo lost her arms intercepting an attempt on Min Ja’s life several years ago. Afterward, Min Ja named Da Seo her equal. The Songlander court has tried to pressure Min Ja into producing an heir with a man. But she refuses. Where the princess goes, Da Seo goes.

Presently, Min Ja addressed me again. “Your mother,” she said slowly, “once controlled my baby brother. That witch made him forsake his own sister. His own family.” Her upper lip wrinkled, as though my mother’s memory tasted bitter. “But my consort’s heart is softer than mine. Da Seo reminds me that for some reason, Woo In trusted you enough to return to Songland. My brother has never been a good judge of character. Still—” She gave a begrudging sniff. “Because of you, my baby brother came home. And for that reason alone . . . Songland will consider your offer. But it won’t be my mother inside your head, Little Empress.” Min Ja flashed a mirthless smile. “It will be me.”

As the hall looked on in confusion, Min Ja gently patted her mother’s arm. The elderly queen blinked back at her sleepily.

Min Ja said, “We were going to wait to announce it. But we should tell them, Ommah.”

Hye Sun expelled a phlegmy sigh from deep in her lungs, nodded once, and reached for the thick gold pin piercing her elaborate silver top knot. She handed it to Min Ja, and with a gasp from the entire hall, the princess threaded it through her own shining dark bun.

“As Regent, I thought I could be what Songland needs,” Hye Sun croaked, seeming to summon strength for the short speech. “But these past few weeks has made one thing painfully clear—Songland does not need a doting grandmother. It needs a warrior queen. And so,” she rasped, “before this hall of witnesses, I abdicate my crown and bestow it on my daughter, Min Ja, my late husband’s chosen heir of Songland.”

Surprised murmurs filled the hall. I gaped like a fish.

I don’t like this. Ai Ling’s wary voice sprang into my mind. Tar, you weren’t planning to anoint Min Ja. It’s not too late. There’s still time to back out.

Min Ja’s gaze fixed haughtily on mine. For a moment I quailed—but then I saw another face. A young Redemptor girl, Ye Eun, scowling with agonized determination before plunging into the Oruku Breach.

The abiku may not care if I anoint Songland, I told Ai Ling. But I do.

I raised the chalice at my side to Min Ja. “To the new queen of Songland,” I said quietly. “Whom I hope to call my sister.”

Min Ja lifted her cup, expressionless as the baffled court applauded. Then she asked in her blunt, clipped voice, “If I join your council, will you require me to wed you?”

If I had been allowed to drink my palm wine, I would have choked on it.

“Wed—me?” I gasped. “I . . . of course not!”

“There is no of course about it,” another realm ruler spoke up. It was Maharani Sadhika of Dhyrma, an amber-skinned queen covered in bangles. She flared a jewel-studded nostril, tossing a glossy braid. “Anointed Ones swear fealty to their Raybearer, no? In mind and in body. But some of us already have spouses. Concubines.” She gestured to the retinue of pretty young men who sat around her. “Do you expect us to forsake them for you?”

“No. I mean . . .” I sputtered. “Celibacy is custom, yes. But I won’t require it. It’s certainly not necessary to accept the Ray.”

A strident tenor remarked, “How disappointing.”

My face burned in surprise. Scandalized whispers tittered throughout the hall. Heart pounding with irritation, I met the speaker’s eye.

Zuri, King of Djbanti, stared straight back.

He looked my age, with waist-length locks tied back in a sweeping ponytail. His form, though athletic, sprawled drunkenly across his seat cushion. A gold ring winked in his ear over a smooth jawline. His lips curved generously, a permanent kiss.

“I, for one,” he slurred, “was looking forward to meeting our empress’s private needs. After all, the law requires Raybearers to produce heirs with their Anointed Ones. We must obey the law, Lady Empress.”

Ignore him, Ai Ling Ray-spoke, rolling her eyes. Zuri’s beauty is the only interesting thing about him. He was crowned barely a year ago, and he spends all his time hunting and gambling on mancala. Nyamba’s true rulers are merchants. Zuri’s nothing more than a puppet. At least . . . that’s what my spies report. I didn’t get much out of him directly. Ai Ling paused. My persuasion Hallow didn’t . . . work on Zuri, exactly. He avoided direct answers to my questions, and so I don’t know what he thinks of you. He came to the banquet anyway, obviously. But I’m still trying to figure out why I couldn’t influence him.

You have to have a brain to be persuaded, I retorted, and Ai Ling’s laughter vibrated through the bond.

Then I told Zuri of Djbanti, “Traditions are made to be broken.”

His dark features shifted in surprise, then he erupted in laughter. The low, musical sound infected the hall, easing the tension and causing others to join in. I smiled instinctively, though something about Zuri’s laugh made my brows knit. He didn’t sound insincere, exactly. Just . . . precise. As though his voice were a song practiced to perfection—an instrument carefully tuned.

“I meant no offense, Your Imperial Majesty,” said Zuri, flashing a pearly smile that left me—just a little—breathless. “I look forward to falling in love with all of you.” He scooped up his chalice, sloshing the wine. I was dimly aware that while other guests had drained cup after cup, Zuri’s had stayed full. Still, he loafed on his cushion, slurring as he tasted. “To peace,” he declared, with a flourish.

“To peace,” the hall echoed, and the mood lightened from Zuri’s antics.

Ji Huan, the boy king of Moreyao, blurted out, “But we don’t have powers.” He looked no older than thirteen, and drowned in a red silk robe embroidered with blossoms. “Anointed Ones are Hallowed, aren’t they?”

“I won’t require Hallows of my Anointed Ones,” I told him with a wink. “This council . . . I want it to be different. It won’t exist to protect me, but to save the empire. To build bonds of trust that can withstand attacks from the abiku.” I still wore the sunstone from the Nu’ina Eve festival at the base of my throat, and it warmed as the words poured out of me. “This is bigger than me—than any of us. If we create a new council, we won’t only save thousands of children. We’ll have created a future for Aritsar beyond the Redemptor Treaty. No one remembers how weak our isolated kingdoms were before the empire, but if the history scrolls are true, then we’re safer—and stronger—together. Please . . . help me keep it that way.”

The faces around the table grew still, stunned and thoughtful. My heart surged with hope—and then a cold, breathy voice asked:

“What if we can’t love you?”

Blue eyes framed in crow’s-feet peered at me from beneath a fringe of straw-colored curls. Queen Beatrix of Nontes fluttered two lace fans, an affectation of distress. “I mean no offense,” she mewled. “But in order to accept the Ray, we have to love you, yes? The trouble is—I find it much easier to have respect for men. I do not get along with girls. Women together, we are . . . ” Queen Beatrix gestured airily around the table, though her fan stopped on me. “Irrational. Emotional. I can’t imagine ruling an empire with a woman. Let alone having one in my thoughts.”

I took several deep breaths, blinking at her. “I . . . don’t understand, Your Majesty. You are a queen. And I’ve had girls in my head for years. Frankly, I couldn’t imagine ruling without them.”

Beatrix looked doubtful. Ai Ling and Kirah made faces when the queen wasn’t looking, wiggling their eyebrows at me from across the table. I forgot to tell you, Ai Ling Ray-spoke gayly. Beatrix is one of those ladies. You know—the ones who think it’s sexy to have an inferiority complex. I stifled a snort, and my sisters’ laughter rang in my mind.

I wished suddenly that Mayazatyl, Emeronya, and Thérèse could be here too. No—I wished that we were back at Yorua Keep, giggling on a sun-soaked beach, with no worries but our scrolls and riddle games, as we fed one another figs and cornrowed each other’s hair. I had the best sisters I could ever ask for.

So how could I ever anoint someone like Beatrix?

I sighed, praying to the Storyteller for patience, and forced a smile. “Love is complicated,” I told the Nontish queen. “All I ask, Your Majesty, is that you’re willing to try.”

“But what if it’s impossible?” Beatrix pressed. “Impossible to love you?”

My jaw ticked. But before I could say something I’d regret, Dayo made an announcement.

“I have a theory,” he said grandly, while Ray-speaking privately: I have a surprise.

My arm hair stood immediately on edge. Dayo had notoriously poor instincts for surprises. For my seventeenth birthday just last week, he had presented me with a pearl-pink albino baby elephant—an attempt to make up for all the years he had tried to make me forget about Swana.

“It’s to remind you of the grasslands,” he had said eagerly. “Elephants have amazing memories, and you have your Hallow. You two are going to be best friends.”

The calf had proceeded to escape its pen near the Imperial Suite, get high grazing on kuso-kuso, and break into the bathhouses, where it splashed muddily into a pool of screaming noblewomen. Last I’d heard, my new best friend had been penned in the northern palace orchards, giving the poor imperial orange-pickers gray hairs.

But before I could interrogate Dayo further, he was addressing the entire Imperial Hall. “I’ve given a lot of thought to why Anointed Ones are so faithful,” he said. “So intimate with each other. It doesn’t make sense, when you think about it, right? Anointed Ones are strangers as children. They swear fealty to the Raybearer, not to each other. Yet in five hundred years of councils, Anointed Ones have never betrayed each other. Why?”

After a pause, King Nadrej of Biraslov ventured in his guttural accent, “Fear of council sickness, of course.” The mustachioed king wrapped his fur-lined garments closer about him, which he had insisted on wearing even in the Oluwan heat.

King Uxmal of Quetzala agreed, stroking jade crystal gages that hung low in each of his ears. Embedded crystals of turquoise and pyrite flashed in his teeth. “Any rivals would endure each other’s company, if the alternative was going mad.”

“I don’t think that’s the answer,” Kirah said. “Forced companionship makes people hate each other as often as not.”

“Then it’s because Anointed Ones share a common goal: to protect the Raybearer,” suggested Chief Uriyah, ruler of the Blessid Valley clans. “Just as we Blessids are many tribes, but we unite to preserve our way of life.”

“But the Blessid nomads have more in common than just one goal,” Dayo replied. “You have customs. Religion, histories. Anointed Ones hail from different realms, often with conflicting cultures and values. So why do they love each other?”

Silence spread across the table, and Dayo bounced on his heels with excitement.

“It’s the Ray bond,” he announced. “Ray-speaking. Having someone else’s thoughts and desires feel like your own. If one person understands another completely—from their deepest pain to their most passing thought—I think they can’t help but love each other. I think . . .” Dayo gave me a small smile and shrugged, crinkling his burn scar. “When you take someone’s story as your own, it’s no different than loving yourself. Tarisai can’t Ray-speak with you yet. But she can share her memories. All of them.”

Every bone in my body turned to ice.

“It shouldn’t take more than a few weeks per person, I think,” Dayo went on brightly. “Her memories work like dreams, hours compressed down into seconds, and”—

Are you out, I screeched at him through the Ray, of your yam-loving mind?

—“though it might feel strange, once you get to know Tar . . .” He grinned. “You can’t help but love her.”


Dayo, you’re going to get me killed. How can I show these people my memories? They hate me enough already!

He blinked, confused at my distress. But it’s the only way. They can’t bond with you if you don’t open up a little.

Open up? I was hyperventilating. Open up? Dayo, this won’t be like sharing a few secrets after a night of honeywine. This is my life. My whole life. I tried to murder you, for Am’s sake.

They’ll know why you did it, though, Dayo protested. They’ll feel your love for your mother. Your love for me. Tar . . . your memories tell your story better than you ever could.

My throat closed with fear. I won’t survive this, I thought numbly, and Ai Ling took my hand.

Dayo, she Ray-spoke, you should have asked Tar first. Announcing it like this wasn’t fair. If she does this, there’s no going back.

Dayo deflated with guilt, fumbling with the mask on his chest. You’re right. I’m sorry, Tar. I was just trying to help. He paused. But they don’t have to like you to love you, you know. They only have to understand.

As I processed this, Ai Ling said aloud, “A good time to go around the table, I think.”

She signaled to the attendants, who passed kola nuts to every ruler, and then held up the empty vessel. “If you accept the invitation of the emperor and empress to stay at Ileyoba (the central palace and seat of power, remember?) and secure the future of Aritsar,” Ai Ling said, “then place your token in this bowl. Or, if you would rather risk a future of eternal child sacrifice, permanently interrupted trade, and another War of Twelve Armies against the Underworld . . . keep the token to yourself.”

The air in the room chilled. But as I watched with both relief and terror, one by one, kola nuts dropped into the bowl.

“Accept—accept—accept.”

Reluctant words of assent from Min Ja, Uriyah, Helius, Sadhika, Ji Huan, Nadrej, Edwynn of Mewe, Danai, Kwasi of Nyamba, and Uxmal. Zuri threw in his kola nut with a flourish and a wink. Even Beatrix tossed hers in, with a haughty shrug.

My banquet had been a success. But still my hands sweated, numb with fear. I may have promised to enter the Underworld . . . but nothing scared me more than the promise to which Dayo had bound me: exposing my ugliest memories to twelve complete strangers.

In between sets of the ijo agbaye, the realm rulers and their retinues performed regional dances in my honor, with some instruments and costumes that I had never seen before. Nadrej and his Biraslovian attendants spun in colorful dervishes; Ji Huan’s courtiers pantomimed with Moreyaoese masks and ribbon streamers—even stuffy Beatrix performed, stepping with her ladies in a Nontish procession of poses called a pavane. With every display of silk, gold, and precious jewel adornments, I thought of what Mayazatyl had told me before the banquet. How many of those treasures came from mines and mills that Dayo and I owned?


Ji Huan of Moreyao and Uriyah of Blessid Valley took longer to adjust to my new memories than Min Ja and Da Seo, but to my relief and surprise, neither of them left in disgust.

“So you really just stabbed Emperor Ekundayo?” Ji Huan asked for the fifth time as I helped him fly a pelican-shaped kite in the palace gardens. “Just stabbed him right there in the open? Was it hard? Bet it was messy. With loads of blood.”

“You saw what happened,” I told him, squirming uncomfortably. “I showed you the memory.”

“Yes, but . . .” The young king nearly lost his grip on the kite strings, eager brown eyes fixed on my face. After I had shared my unaltered memories, Ji Huan’s shyness around me had evolved into morbid admiration. “It all happened so fast. Could you show me again? Maybe that fight on the palace roof too—when you made Anointed Honor Thaddace kill Emperor Olugbade, and the High Priestess fell but Woo In saved her. Then that part when you flew through the sky, and arrows flew everywhere and—”

“No. Ji Huan, those memories weren’t fun for me! You felt how much pain I was in. Why would you want to relive that?”

The boy looked sheepish. “I forgot about that part. I’m sorry, Lady Empress.”

“It’s all right.” I sighed, melting at his dejected expression and ruffling his hair. “And we’re friends now. Call me Tarisai.”

“Sorry, Tarisai.” He paused. “It’s just—I’ve never gotten to do anything. At least, not go on adventures, like you. My uncles won’t let me go anywhere.” He shuffled his silk-slippered feet and cast a furtive look at two men with flowing robes and long, gray beards: the Lord Regents of Moreyao. They sat a short distance away, sipping tea on a blanket, and occasionally casting dour looks at me and Ji Huan.

“They won’t even let me fly a kite without supervision,” Ji Huan grumbled. “And I can’t have friends they don’t approve of. They’re probably trying to read our lips right now.”

I frowned in sympathy. “I used to live in a place like that.”

“Even at the Children’s Palace, eyes were always watching you,” he said. “I know what that’s like.”

I took in his round innocent features, my former anxiety mirrored there. “Ji Huan, if you join my council, I’ll never control whom you talk to, you know. There won’t be any tests. No judging. All we have to do is be there for each other. Plus, thanks to Ray-speaking . . .” I tapped his head and winked at him. “We can talk anytime you like. And no one can read our lips.”

He brightened. “Can I really tell you anything?”

My mind flashed back to another little boy, peeking out at me from behind a Children’s Palace curtain.

You’re going to be another one, aren’t you? A person I like. A person they take away.

“Anything,” I said, placing my hand over his on the kite string. Then, I let the Ray blaze around my ears and sent a message into the crackling beam: Did I tell you about the time I threatened a Bush-spirit with a stick?

“Yes,” said Ji Huan, “but I want to hear it again, especially the part when you saved Anointed Honor Sanjeet from—” He broke off, realizing what had just happened. “I . . . I . . .”

“You heard me.” I sighed. “And I’d much rather show you Bush-spirits than memories of me stabbing people.”

Ji Huan dropped the string and pulled me into a hug, then stepped back just as quickly, flushing. The sun kite escaped, dancing in circles on the wind, then drifting to a dot in the cloudless Oluwan sky.

Someday I’ll be free like that, came Ji Huan’s voice in my head. But until then—tell me another story, my Tarisai.

Uriyah’s love for me was more complicated, and not in a way I liked. The old chief reminded me of Olugbade, in that he seemed especially fond of those more ignorant than himself—or at least, those he perceived to be. When I showed him my ugliest flaws, his features took on a paternal glow.

“ ‘The wisest ruler must also be humble,’ ” he intoned, reaching to raise my downcast chin. “ ‘Take heart, therefore, in your mistakes.’ ”

We sat together in Uriyah’s study, at his villa in the Ileyoba district. Mountains of books and dusty scrolls surrounded us on the musty carpet, smelling vaguely of ink and camel hair.

“Thank you,” I told him, swallowing my irritation at being patronized. “I’ll certainly give that some th—”

“Cassius Mehedi the Surefooted,” he interrupted, stroking his silver-streaked beard. “Ninth treatise, fifth verse. Mehedi’s writings on humility are truly illuminating, and were my greatest comfort as a budding young ruler. I should have recommended them to you ages ago,” he murmured, whirling around his study and selecting a pile of tomes. He dropped them in my lap, rheumy eyes winking with excitement. “Take these for tonight. I’ve included Ahwadi the Dune Dweller’s verses on filial piety—due to the complex relationship you had with your mother—and the poetry of Yakov the Wanderer, though I admit his work is elementary. You’ve read him, of course . . .” At my blank stare, he chuckled indulgently. “Ah. Well, don’t be ashamed, child. In fact, I envy you. To be young again, at the very beginning of one’s moral journey . . .” He trailed off, blinking at me wistfully. “There’s nothing quite like it.”

“Er—thank you,” I repeated, shifting beneath the teetering pile of books. “But there’s a lot I have to get done before my journey to the Underworld. I’m not sure I’ll have much time for, um, leisure reading.”

“Of course, of course,” he said, patting my hand. “I understand completely.” But before my shoulders could sag with relief, the chief added, “I’ll summarize the texts for you. In particular, I think you’ll truly connect with Elenya the Acolyte’s musings on the nature of friendship and betrayal. I recall one passage in which she . . .”

My neck pricked with worry. Had I succeeded in giving my memories to Uriyah, only to be saddled with another arduous task? Would he need me to become an expert in philosophy before I could anoint him?

But over the next few days, as I fought to keep my eyelids open through lectures on royal virtue, I soon realized that the rate of my progress meant little to Chief Uriyah. It was my potential that enamored him—that chaotic canvas of my life’s mistakes, waiting to be molded into a work of art. This would have annoyed me more, if it weren’t for Uriyah’s boyish joy in teaching. He seemed to crave a project: a willing vessel for his years of pedantic study.

As my headaches progressed, and the chorus of ojiji grew louder in my head, a strange relief enveloped me as I sat in Uriyah’s dusty study. I nodded in the right places when he waxed philosophical, and watched his wrinkle-set eyes shine when I quoted a text correctly. Here was one person, at least, who I had not disappointed as an empress. Whose needs I could satisfy with nothing more than a listening ear—and a cup of honeybush tea, shared over the ramblings of dead philosophers.

I would never be as close to Uriyah as I was to Min Ja, or even to Ji Huan. But at the end of one lesson, when I Ray-spoke as an experiment, Pride is a stumbling block to the young ruler . . . and Uriyah absentmindedly Ray-spoke back, Rinel the Goatminder, treatise five, verse twenty—I was pleased to hear his voice in my head.

In three more months, I had anointed seven more rulers: Uxmal of Quetzala, Sadhika of Dhyrma, Danai of Swana, Edwynn of Mewe, Helius of Sparti, Nadrej of Biraslov. After seeing my fraught memories, even Beatrix of Nontes developed a perverse maternal affection for me, allowing for an anointing.

Two stripes remained pale on my lioness mask: one for Kwasi of Nyamba and one for Zuri of Djbanti. Apparently I only gained immunities when I anointed members of my empire—when Min Ja accepted my Ray, the stripes had remained as they had before. Redemptor marks covered my skin from toe to collarbone, leaving clear my neck, face, and the palms of my hands alone.


My room was a maze of chests, cushions, and gilded side tables, covered with cosmetics whose functions I had yet to memorize. The sparkling theater of Ileyoba life was a sharp contrast to the barefoot simplicity of Yorua Keep, and the military order of the Children’s Palace. I dug through several ornate chests, sneezing at perfumed sachets of myrrh and amber before finding a linen night shift, embroidered at the collar with a chain of sunbursts.


A CORONATION PARADE THROUGH ILEYOBA AND THE CAPITAL

The night before a coronation, the Imperial Guard imposed an early curfew, and the million residents  took to their homes in quiet revelry—feasting, storytelling, burning lamps all night . . . and peeking if they dared from their windows, hoping for a glance of their future emperor as he walked the streets in the dark. Tonight, they would look for two figures instead of one.

We continued down the wall, kneeling and paying tribute every half mile. Moonlight glowed across the broad gravel avenues, and lamps twinkled festively in every window. Faint music wafted into the streets from closed shops and high-rises. Children’s voices lifted in praise of Dayo, placing his name in the ancient hymn of Aritsar: Eleven moons watch the sun dance: Black and gold, Ekundayo!

But every so often, a new song spilled into the streets. I’d heard the melody before, mocked by nobles in the palace . . . but these commoners sang it in full voice, sending a thrill of joy and terror down my arms.

There is no night in Oluwan, nse, nse
The sky is bright in Swana—awaken, bata-bata.
They lie awake in Moreyao; nse, nse
They sing in Nontes and Biraslov; snow melting, gun-godo.
Djbanti and Nyamba rise, tada-ka, tada-ka
Look, their children never sleep! Eyes open, bata-bata!

Why, you ask? Why?
The Pelican has spoken.

A sun for the morning, a sun for the evening,
And moons for years to come
.

Dhyrma, Blessid Valley, nse, nse
Sparti’s tears have all dried up; tada-ka, tada-ka
Quetzala grins and shields its eyes; nse, nse!
Mewe will shed its heavy skins; gun-godo, gun-godo

Why, you ask? Why?
The Pelican has spoken!

Tarisai for the morning!
Ekundayo for the evening!
And peace for moons to come
.

“Do you think they mean it?” I whispered. “That they’ve accepted me already?”

Dayo grinned up at the high-rise buildings. They twinkled like beacons over the empty, mist-filled streets, and the vibrations of drums and voices shook the earth beneath us. “Sure sounds like it,” he said.

When I didn’t look reassured, he checked to make sure the guards were out of earshot, then turned me to face him.

......................................

So I followed him, stealing through the district. He cut through streets like someone who had done it many times, and before long, we reached the wide, fountain-dotted streets of the Ileyoba District.

Imperial Guard warriors flanked the villa assigned to Djbanti delegates, and high, smooth plaster rendered the walls unscalable. But before the warriors could spot us, Zuri took my hand, muttered feverishly, and tensed in pain—just like he had done at Olojari, when he vanished into thin air. My limbs hummed, in sync with his vibrating form . . . and then the wide street disappeared.

We stood in an elegant, citrus-scented bedchamber. The brick pattern matched the building we had just seen on the street—we were inside the Djbanti delegate villa. I dropped Zuri’s hand, stomach lurching with nausea and confusion. “I—how did you—”

“What?” Zuri strolled casually to an end table and offered me a towel. “Never traveled by lodestone before?”

I took the towel gingerly, swabbing at my gore-covered face. “Of course I have,” I wheezed. “That is not what that was.”

“Stomachache feels about the same,” Zuri countered, and then peeled off one of his leather bands. With a jolt, I realized it was the same arm on which he always wore his wide gold cuff. There in his skin, encased in festering, veiny flesh, were two hunks of stone.

Zuri was using ibaje—the same deadly Pale Arts as the deformed assassin from that night in the square.

The largest rock embedded in his skin was metallic gray, dotted with tiny ashen symbols. The second made my breath catch in horror—a multifaceted emerald stone, glinting with malevolent light.

“That gem,” I bleated, brushing my chin in the sign of the Pelican. “It was in Melu’s cuff. My mother used that to enslave an alagbato. Are you—Are you a djinn? An ehru?”

“In a way. To my own ambition.” He smiled wryly. “That stone is known as idekun—a mineral that grows only in the Underworld, though it’s available up here for a . . . generous price. It is said to amplify the wearer’s natural power, but it also binds the wearer to a person—or a cause. Until that person is satisfied, or that cause is fulfilled—idekun torments you.” He grimaced as the green stone flashed, seeming to lash him. But he shook off the pain and pointed to the larger stone. “I’m sure you recognize this one. It’s a piece of lodestone. The lodestones scattered throughout the empire originally came from the Underworld—did you know that? Alone, this piece lets me travel to other stones. But the idekun magnifies its power, allowing me to transport anywhere.”

“And that’s why you haven’t been caught,” I murmured. “How you’ve been waking alagbatos all over the empire as the Crocodile, while still making appearances at court.”

“You’re quick. Though it’s still hard to lead revolutions when I can’t be everywhere at once.”

“Aren’t you afraid of being poisoned?” I sputtered. “That’s Pale Arts. Ibaje never comes without a price.”

“Of course I’ve paid a price.” He chuckled, replacing the arm band, and his eyes looked bright and manic. “But at least, unlike the rest of my family, I got to pick my poison.”

My vision spun. The empty-headed king of Djbanti—the gambling drunkard who couldn’t tell one end of a scepter from the other—was the Crocodile. The name whispered in the streets and written at the top of my security reports. Leader of the most organized vigilante group in Aritsar, responsible for disrupting industries across the empire.

“How?” I squeaked. “How can you be the Crocodile?”

He poured himself a drink from a tall, fluted carafe. “You mean, ‘How can a man you can’t stand turn out to have a brain after all?’ ” He smiled, a white flash against midnight skin. “Sorry. That’s unfair.” He swirled the drink in his hand—herb water, not wine as I expected. I wondered again if I had ever seen Zuri drink at all. At court functions, he slurred and stumbled around, but his cup was always full. “I’m good at playing an idiot,” he said. “I have to be.”

“Who knows?” I demanded. “Your servants, obviously. But the other rulers? Your government? All of Djbanti? Did everyone know about this but me?”

“With a few exceptions, my servants believe I sneak out to brothels. As for the other monarchs and my warlords”—he took a long swill from his chalice—“they think I’m an even bigger halfwit than you do. Even the revolutionaries who follow the Crocodile are uncertain of his identity, though I’m sure some of them have guessed.”

I crossed my arms. “Then the only people in the world who know you’re the Crocodile—who know the real you—are a couple servants . . . and me?”

.....  

The Holy Olojari Forge and iron quarry rested in the heart

of a scruff-covered mountain, hollowed out over centuries for

the purpose. As the temple prospered, a chain of villages had

sprouted up at the mountain’s feet, servicing the forge with

generations of miners, blacksmiths, and inns for the year-round influx of Ember-sect tourists.

At first, we passed through a patchwork of sumptuous

noble villa estates, roofs dotted with iron statues of bluebloods

—the same nobles, I imagined, who had managed the quarry

on my ancestors’ behalf for generations. Every now and then,

an orange fleck buzzed near my ear, and something sharp and

piercingly hot accosted me in the face. Once, I slapped my

neck and brought my hand away to reveal the squashed

carcass of a tiny winged creature.

“Ina sprites,” Dayo observed. “Fire spirits. With so many,

the forge must be thriving.”

But the closer we got to the temple, the more I sensed

something terribly, terribly wrong. The villages, while

numerous, were little more than tenements and mudhouses

crowded together, with the occasional tourist’s inn surrounded

by beggars. As far as I knew, the forge had employed Olojari

commoners for hundreds of years. So why did so many live in

squalor?

The narrow streets and markets lay spookily bare. Twin statues of Warlord Fire, depicted as a barrel-chested giant with billowing

hair and wicked amethyst eyes, framed the arch. A phrase in

large script, mottled with ash and soot, had been carved into

the entryway:

IN THE EYE OF KUNLEO, OLOJARI WILL

PROSPER.

The statues

depicted Warlord Fire, flames bursting from the god’s

handsome face in a malevolent halo. One hand was clenched

above his head in a fist, as though ready to smite, and the other

held an outstretched spear, its tip capped in pearly ivory and

pulsing with pale light. It didn’t look like the Oruku Breach,

but then again, I didn’t have much experience with

supernatural portals.

Some in the crowd bore picks and iron mallets, others simply

lifted bruised and calloused hands, as if in prayer. But all of

them swayed, voices lifted in rasping song and jaundiced eyes

alight with hunger. From the sidelines, well-dressed

bluebloods looked on with nervous scorn. As for the Ember

priests of the forge, who stood out in costumes of red and

gold, their sympathies appeared to be split. Some acolytes

stood with the poor and rioting, joining in their music, and

blessing them in red clouds of incense. Other acolytes stood

with the wealthy, sneering at the rabble, and making signs of

the Pelican to ward off evil.

Alarmed at the unrest, our Imperial Guard escort fell in

place around us. 

.....

All the center realms—Oluwan, Swana, Djbanti, and

Nyamba—were known for beautiful clothing, but Nyamba

took the crown. I’d heard of Nyamban lords going bankrupt

trying to follow their country’s ever-revolving fashions, and of

weavers with divine gifts, like Umansa and his prophetic

tapestries.

....

He flourished a hand, then smiled tightly. “Djbanti

has long been controlled by merchant-warlords. Their riches

outweigh my treasury, and if it were up to them, they would

erase my family altogether. But the common people of Djbanti

revere us, and so we remain. The warlords could snuff out a

peasant uprising, of course, but civil wars are expensive, and

would interrupt what they love most: their precious supply

lines.”

“So they made the Wanguru puppets, instead.” I tried to

hide the pity in my voice.

Zuri nodded once. “We look the other way as the warlords

seize every mill, mine, and quarry that the Kunleos don’t own

already. And if any king dares show a hint of backbone, he’s

eliminated. When I was still a boy, I learned to keep my

temper quiet, and my words pretty.” He ran a calloused hand

through his locs, which fell in sheets over his dark shoulder.

“The warlord system was initially well-intended. Their

merchants were supposed to compete with each other, keeping

prices low for the people. Then they realized they were

stronger together. They united and made pacts to drive up the

price of basic goods, like rice and palm oil. My people were

driven to desperation.”

I put my bowl down, jaw tightening. “It’s not just Djbanti,”

I said bleakly. “I’ve read every report I can. Nobles in Mewe

and Biraslov practically enslave their poor, all to make a profit

on wool and ice blocks.”

....

Because I woke in a crystalline garden hedged in

cardamom and rosebushes. In the midst of trees covered in

sparkling amber bark, Sanjeet’s broad form sat hunched on a

bench, faced away from me, while he plucked forlornly at a

flower that appeared to be made of rubies. “The enchanted

Royal Garden of Vhraipur, in the heart of Dhyrma. Amah used

to bring me here as a boy. Gems, silk, precious stones as far as

the eye can see. You’d think thieves would help themselves.

But if anyone tries to steal a bud out of its natural habitat”—he

snapped the ruby rose from its stem, and the blossom

crumbled instantly to dust—“it ceases to be.”

..... The DEATHS IN THE UNDERWORLD

“She calls us kind,” rasped a beast with hair like bristles.

Its scaly tongue smoldered, a dying coal, and flicked the

creature’s eyes as it spoke. “Death is often kind, to those

exhausted by the boon of living. Are you exhausted,

Wuraola?”

“N-No,” I stammered, lifting a stubborn chin. “I want to

live.”

“Oh?” Another creature crept closer, eel-like, with veiny,

translucent skin and unblinking, fishlike eyes. In a low,

gurgling voice, the beast who could only be Drowning asked

the question I had been waiting for. “And out of all the souls

of the Overworld—the mortals who have died, and are dying,

as we speak—why should you be allowed to live?”

I inhaled, then blurted the answer I’d rehearsed with Kirah:

“Because I’m saving lives,” I said. “I’m a good empress. And

a good person.”

Again, laughter shook the bridge, causing bile to roil in my

stomach.

“Such hubris,” hissed Poison, a boil-covered beast with

foul green breath. “Only a year ago, your hands ran with the

blood of an innocent prince.”

“And from birth,” grunted Organ-Death, a tusked boar

with twitching arteries, bulging like vines beneath its skin,

“your days were gilded in wealth and privilege. Everything

you own—your crown, your palace, even the friends you call

your Anointed Ones—was bought with the lives of children.”

The words lashed like whips. Organ-Death spoke the truth.

Without Redemptors, Enoba Kunleo the Perfect could never

have brought peace to Aritsar. And without peace, he could

not have reigned as emperor.

All this time, one beast watched me without saying a word:

a sharp-clawed lion with blank, milky eyes, and a floating

translucent mane. A sickening metallic smell filled my nose as

I watched it, and I knew instinctively that this was one of the

Unnamed Deaths—a terror beyond words.

“I’m trying to make things right,” I croaked at last. “But

how can I change Aritsar if I’m dead? I deserve to live

because I care. I can fix it!”

“All you could achieve,” wheezed the hairy, snub-nosed

beast of Suffocation, “was fulfilled when you entered the

Underworld. The new Treaty is complete. You are the last of

history’s Redemptors. In death, you have accomplished far

more than your life ever did.”

“To the thousands of souls already lost,” added a frost-

white wolf, crouching to its massive haunches, “to the

Redemptors sacrificed before you . . . you are no savior. The

only thing you have left to offer them is justice: an eye for an

eye.” From the hunger in its cloudy yellow eyes, I knew

without a doubt that this was Old Age—one of the beasts,

along with the Unnamed Deaths, who could still kill me.

“Your life,” it said, “for the ones your ancestors took.”

I had heard these words before, of course: in the pounding

melody of my headaches, the song at the edge of my

nightmares.

Pay the price.

Again, they laughed. “You may fear touching us now,

Wuraola,” came the phlegmy chuckle of Contagion. “But all

Redemptors forget fear once they meet their emi-ehran.”

....... WAR IN ARITSAR

Sanjeet, Dayo, and Captain Bunmi lead the fray atop

armored war buffalo, beating back the undead creatures with a

cohort of Imperial Guard warriors.

In truth, it is not an Army of Twelve Realms, but thirteen,

for Songland has arrived. From atop a turret, Min Ja directs a

unit of fire-speaking sowanhada warriors, her long jet hair

streaming like a pennant. The warriors punch the air in unison,

sending up a spray of flame, which Min Ja directs in a lethal

wind toward the invaders.

The battleground is a patchwork of realms. Quetzalan war

machines ignite cannons, sending frozen balls of holy water

into the Breach, while Moreyaoese archers shower the enemy

with arrows. Biraslovians in horned helmets ride packs of

snow-white battle wolves, providing cover for Swanian and

Nyamban warriors, who hurl spears with deadly accuracy.

Warriors of the new Djbanti commonwealth fight shoulder to

shoulder with Spartian soldiers, and Mewish berserkers, fierce

in bright blue war paint and capes of tartan, share mounts with

Dhyrmish charioteers. Blessid and Nontish healers retrieve the

fallen, tending to wounds with grim efficiency.

Yet for all its colorful glory, dispatching hordes back into

the Breach like a well-oiled machine, the Army of Twelve

Realms was flagging. How could it do otherwise? Their

enemy could not die. For every cursed Redemptor set aflame

or corralled into cages or hurled back into the Underworld . . .

there were ten more behind it. And they’d only continued.

......

So often, I remembered the distant world he had described

—that state of Aritsar before Enoba established his empire.

We did not always have kings in the central kingdoms.

Once, leaders were merely the hand of their people.

viernes, 19 de marzo de 2021

A LES MISÉRABLES ARITSAR / RAYBEARER AU? WHY NOT!

 Oluwan and Swana bring his drum; nse, nse 

Dhyrma and Nyamba bring his plow; gpopo, gpopo 

Mewe and Sparti see our older brother dance— 

Black and gold, isn’t he perfect! 

Quetzala sharpens his spear; nse, nse 

Blessid Valley weaves his wrapper; gpopo, gpopo 

Nontes and Biraslov see our older brother dance! 

Black and gold, isn’t he perfect? (In Enjolras' case, blue and gold).

Djbanti braids his hair; nse, nse 

Moreyao brings his gourd; gpopo, gpopo 

Eleven moons watch our older brother dance: 

Black and gold, isn’t he perfect?


When you meet Egungun, will you have your eyes-o?

Tell me, will you hear him, if you have no ears-o?

Dead man, dead man, fell like a coconut

Round head rolling

on the red hard ground. (Execution song)

 

Of what use—Tell us!

Of what use is an empty throne?

We have found someone worthy—Have you found someone?

Aheh, Kunleo is worthy to fill it—Yes, Kunleo is worthy to fill it. (Coronation Song)


“ODODO the hunter, UKPOPO, UKPOPO, more handsome than princes; aheh, no lie!”


Eleven danced around the throne, 

Eleven moons in glory shone, 

They shone around the sun. 

But traitors rise and empires fall, 

And Sun-Ray-Sun will rule them all, 

When all is said-o, all is said 

And done-heh, done-heh, done...

But traitors fall and empires rise,

And Sun-Ray-Sun will rule the skies,

When all is said-o, all is said

And done-heh, done-heh, done...

Arit folk songs.

 

The title of StrixAlluka's newest AU/crossover is still to be debated - Eleven Moons Aligned or Eleven Moons Eclipsed - it's actually the Eleven Moons Diptych, with each half sporting either title... but anyway, while waiting for her Aritsar take on the cast of Les Mis, here is a little dramatis personae:


The Oba's Council - noteworthy members:

Oba Othello - ruler of the Arit Empire, Raybearer. Currently comatose with his council as regency until he finally dies and his son becomes the next oba - or not?

High Priestess Nadia Satrinava - Dhyrma, death by contagion / hallow of seeing visions:

High Lord General Connor McLeod - Mewe, death by bleeding / hallow of invulnerability:

(Late High Lady General Morga Eirsdottir - Biraslov, death by mauling / hallow of unmatched speed):

(Late High Priest Bienvenu Myriel - Nontes, death by contagion / Hallow of not being able to say no to a request)

High Lady Magus Yan Lin: Moreyao, death by hexes / hallow of bilocation/astral projection:

High Lady Ambassador Cvetka Akulova (here Crown Prince Enjolras' mother) - Biraslov, death by suffocation / hallow of creating cold and ice:

High Lady Archdean Klytemnestra, my OC Elena the netmender's twin sister (Spare Prince Montparnasse's mother) - Sparti, death by organ failure / hallow of summoning fire and explosions

High Lord of Harvests Jean Valjean - Nontes, death by battery / hallow of superhuman strength:

High Lord Judge Javert - Nyamba, death by drowning, hallow of forcing people to tell the truth

High Lady of Castles Aidana (single mother, drunken and addicted to marijuana and kuso-kuso as an analogy to bonding sickness) - Quetzala, death by poisoning, hallow of "insanity" / seeing the worst in other people


The Crown Prince's Council:

Oloye/Crown Prince Enjolras; son of the oba and High Lady Ambassador Cvetka, heir to the throne, raybearer

High Lord Archdean Combeferre - Djbanti, death by poisoning / hallow of eidetic/photographic memory

High Lord General Courfeyrac - Nontes, death by battery / hallow of optimism inducement and happiness inducement

High Lord Laureate Grantaire - Sparti (cabin boy), death by bleeding / hallow of slowing down and taking away entropy (which works like the Stand Crazy Diamond)

High Priestess Cosette Valjean - Biraslov (half-Nontish half-Biraslov isoken), death by gluttony / hallow of glowing in the dark, a different colour based upon her mood

High Lady of Castles Éponine Thénardier - Swana (one-quarter-Nontish one-quarter-Blessid half-Swanian isoken), death by burning / hallow of lie detection

High Lord Judge Marius Pontmercy-Ghàilenor - Mewe (half-Nontish half-Mewish isoken), death by drowning / hallow of giving/taking away hallows

High Lord Ambassador Feuilly - Quetzala (realmless -ie stateless- orphan isoken dreamcatcher maker, origins unknown), death by suffocation / hallow of speaking and understanding every human language

High Lord Magus Jo-Lee Lin - Moreyao (born in Songland, Redemptor adopted by the Lins), death by contagion, hallow of healing illnesses and injuries and transferring them to himself

High Lord Treasurer Lesgle "Bossuet" - Nyamba, death by organ failure / hallow of giving good luck at the cost of suffering bad luck himself (he does so by shaking hands or having a kiss blown his way, alluding to the lyrics of "Chim Chim Cheree")

High Lord of Husbandry Bahorel - Dhyrma, death by mauling / hallow of unstoppable righteous anger-trance (think Cú Chulainn or the Incredible Hulk)

High Lady of Harvests Jehanne Prouvaire - Blessid Valley (half-Nontish half-Blessid isoken; trans girl), death by hexes, hallow of making plants grow by petting them and singing to them (her power is even seen to affect fungi, but half as much as plants).


The Ghàilenors of Faye's Crossing

Lleu Ghàilenor - the clan patriarch, Marius' maternal grandfather

Arianrhod Ghàilenor - Marius' maternal grandmother

Aoife Ghàilenor - Marius' maternal maiden aunt and tutor

Saoirse Pontmercy, née Ghàilenor (deceased) - Marius' mother, died in childbed due to heavy bleeding, married to a Nontish commander allegedly "killed in battle" at Gaelinagh as a volunteer


The Satrinavas

Nasrin Satrinava - Nadia's mother, governor of Dhyrma

Namar Satrinava - Nadia's father, consort of Dhyrma

Nafizah Satrinava - Nadia's firstborn sister, next-in-line governor of Dhyrma, a mystic

Nazali Satrinava - Nadia's secondborn sister, a powerful healer

Navra Satrinava - Nadia's thirdborn sister, a life-of-the-party

Nahara Satrinava - Nadia's fourthborn sister, a badass

Nasmira Satrinava - Nadia's fifthborn sister, a nurturer

Natiqa Satrinava - Nadia's sixthborn sister, a chatty cathy


The Lins of the Silver Dragon Inn (and a certain young woman from Songland):

Chen Lin - Hay Lin's father and son to Yan Lin

Jo-An Lin - Hay Lin's mother and in-law to Yan Lin

Chou Khan - Jo-An's father, wealthy tea merchant, against marriage to the Lins, still stern and a tad at odds with Yan

Hay Lin - foster sister to Jo-Lee, a creative and eccentric, artistic soul / Hallow of controlling air

Ye-Seul (Jo-Lee's real mother from Songland) - a high-ranking Songland court lady, unwilling to send her child to the underworld


Others:

Elena the netmender - Sparti (island of Star Point), R's (Grantaire's) biological single mother, unhallowed, outsider since her own shipwreck-widowed-mother Leda died

(Lucio Montagu Morgasson - deceased commander, Biraslov; son of Morga and her consort, husband of Nadia, killed in estate fire - a sociopath who physically, verbally, and emotionally abused his wife)

Montparnasse - spare prince of Aritsar, son of the oba and High Lady Archdean Klytemnestra, prospective usurper - hallow of giving entropy (not the same as accelerating already existing entropy, which his mum has!)

Clovis and Hannah Prouvaire - Jehanne's parents, an average though interracial couple in a semi-nomadic village society in a campsite in Blessid Valley

Sgt. and Mme. Thénardier, Azelma and Gavroche - Éponine's parents and younger siblings, innkeepers on the outskirts of a Swanian market town by a clear lake, a salt lake where lots of flamingos stop on their migration

Rollan, Aidana's son, raised in a Quetzalan orphanage, with the Hallow of becoming rubber and squeezing through tight spaces

Fleur Delacour, Nontish noble girl, with the Hallow of breathing underwater, Courfeyrac's fiancée

Gabrielle Delacour, Fleur's little sister, unhallowed

Cecily Alistair, Mewish noble girl, with the Hallow of super realistic art, bisexual, Marius' fiancée 

(All of these and some more, including Hay Lin, make up Montparnasse's Council in Eleven Moons Eclipsed)

....

Both oloyés (crown princes), Enjolras and Montparnasse, were born of different races and different mothers, but both with the Ray, on the same day, when there was a conjunction of all eleven moons. There could only be one heir. And it is Enj, in spite of his lilywhite skin and the rumour around the court that he may be a bastard. Still, Parnasse, the spare, has not given up and is ready for a coup d'état. When this occurs at last, when all eleven moons eclipse the Sun, together with the young people he recruited as children after seeing them in his dreams, Crown Prince Enjolras has to prepare for civil war all over Aritsar...


viernes, 12 de marzo de 2021

RAYBEARER, PART 1 - THE PREMISE

"For every brow you anoint with the Storyteller's oil, you will gain immunity to one of the thirteen deaths. Choose well, Emperor—for to the world, you will be as a god, but to your council, you will yet be a mortal man."

Eleven danced around the throne, 

Eleven moons in glory shone, 

They shone around the sun. 

But traitors rise and empires fall, 

And Sun-Ray-Sun will rule them all, 

When all is said-o, all is said 

And done-heh, done-heh, done...


 

Oluwan and Swana bring his drum; nse, nse 

Dhyrma and Nyamba bring his plow; gpopo, gpopo 

Mewe and Sparti see our older brother dance— 

Black and gold, isn’t he perfect! 

Quetzala sharpens his spear; nse, nse 

Blessid Valley weaves his wrapper; gpopo, gpopo 

Nontes and Biraslov see our older brother dance! 

Black and gold, isn’t he perfect? 

Djbanti braids his hair; nse, nse 

Moreyao brings his gourd; gpopo, gpopo 

Eleven moons watch our older brother dance: 

Black and gold, isn’t he perfect?

......

Perfume thickened the air, and children tossed petals from the battlements, a flurry of gold, red, and white. Griots beat shakers and drums, and to the rhythm, the townspeople of Ebujo sang a new version of Aritsar’s well-known folk rhyme:

Tarisai brings his drum; nse

Sanjeet and Umansa bring his plow; gpopo

Kameron and Theo watch our older brother dance—

Black and gold: Ekundayo!

Mayazatyl sharpens his spear; nse

Kirah weaves his wrapper; gpopo

Thérèse and Emeronya watch our older brother dance—

Black and gold: Ekundayo!

Zathulu braids his hair; nse

Ai Ling brings his gourd; gpopo

Eleven moons watch the sun dance:

Black and gold: Ekundayo!

So I recently saw Dominic Noble rec Raybearer --- and thought upon my first perusal... there is a fortress on a cliff with a village at its feet, there are counterpart cultures, there is a world as diverse as Westeros, there are hallows which are inborn powers much like Quirks in Boku no Hero (or, more recently, gifts in Encanto!), there is courtly intrigue... this is a setting comparable to Westeros or Hogwarts and definitely right up my alley!!

So maybe a Les Mis AU set in Yorua Keep and Village by StrixAlluka is coming soon? Of course the whole cast has NOT to be Nontish (counterpart French) because the laws of the court and the premise of this world compel it to be ethnically diverse. One character from each region - though some might be immigrants who moved from one region to another, or of interethnic backgrounds (so-called isoken)...

 

Long ago in a faerytale world, on a hollow planet with a sun and eleven moons, there were twelve islands scattered across a super-ocean, each with its own ethnic group/phenotypes, climate, culture, lore... (also, all of them were counterpart cultures) - Unfortunately all of these islands were prey to demons and other creatures of the hostile underworld, that also houses the afterlife, at this planet's Core.

Until the day a founding father used magic to fuse all islands together into a super-continent, becoming its saviour and ruler and spearheading the good fight against the powers of darkness, ultimately unifying all regions in the land through either warfare or diplomacy - except the Songland Peninsula, that became independent. This was Enoba the Perfect of the Kunleo dynasty, the first raybearer or oba (the royal imperial titles) of Aritsar, the diverse Arit Empire.

(Songland is an independent peninsula, ruled by its own royals and far more equal-opportunity than Aritsar with its discrimination of women and queers  --ONLY THE COUNCIL IS ALLOWED TO BE DIVERSE!!--, as well as enchanted sowanhada warriors --sowanhada (soo-AHN-ah-da): A powerful language unique to Songland that permits the user to control various elements. ONLY sowanhada have the hallows that allow them to fly and to control elemental forces...-- think East Asia meets Dorne! Within Aritsar: Blessid Valley is a nomadic desert region of herders and artisans who put emphasis on storytelling and wear cinnamon-scented veils called prayer scarves as a token of devotion to the Storyteller deity - somewhat like the Genesis-era Holy Land. Mewe is the Celtic region of green, craggy hills - the Mewish herd lots of sheep and wear tartan. Nyamba is a subtropical realm known for its astrologers.)
 

Decades and even centuries have passed by and ostensibly nothing has changed, from the snowy arctic peaks of Biraslov (from which the southerners import large blocks of ice) to the booby-trapped rainforests of Quetzala and the coasts of Sparti teeming with fishermen and poets - through the cold, gray realm of Nontes with its lacemakers and rose gardens and apple orchards - or gold-domed royal palaces and sprawling mansions in the district of Ileyoba located in Oluwan, the multicultural capital. Towns with markets, lakes in the woods, frozen tundra... people with milky white skin and Celtic- or Slavic-sounding names and eyes of icy blue or emerald green, or almond eyes and raven hair, or russet skin and the scent of cardamom and eyes the colour of long-stooped tea... There are also isokens, isoken people being those from interracial and interregional parentage; the crown rewards inter-realm families for each isoken child born of their union. Aritsar mirrors our world except that it's magical. Generally, human people are born with special gifts or quirks called hallows (think of them as the quirks in Boku no Hero or the gifts in Encanto), though some are born unhallowed. Healing while singing, super strength, elemental control, seeing the physical or emotional weakness of others, the ability to fly or to induce moods in others... the sky is not the limit for what capability the stars have shone down upon you.

When every oloye, ie crown prince, of Aritsar (born unto the patrilineal Kunleo dynasty) turns 11 - eleven other eleven-year-olds, all of them hallowed like him and of diverse social ranks, join him in the Children's Palace of Ileyoba. Let's say a Nontish demoiselle, a Mewish lad in a tartan kilt, a storyteller girl from Blessid Valley, a young Quetzalan, the list goes on. Not only one child from each region, regardless of gender (and, as they mature, of sexual orientation), but also one child per form of premature death; poisoning, contagion, organ failure, mauling by wild animals, by hexes, suffocation, bleeding, battery, gluttony, burning, drowning. These Eleven, once he has used his power upon them and anointed them with a special heavenly oil, if ruler and ruled are at least close friends with one another, will be his trusted courtiers when he comes of age and inherits the throne to become oba or raybearer. 

 The final resting place for deceased souls in the Aritsar afterlife is the aptly-named Core, a paradise at the very center of the Earth, even deeper than the underworld.

cluster of men and women sprawled on divans and high-backed chairs, murmuring softly. Matching gold circlets gleamed on their brows. Their accents were as different as their complexions, but they gave the impression of a family, or something closer.

Only a Raybearer’s Council of Eleven may kill him. Such is the divine protection of heaven. It allows them to join eleven minds to their own. And none shall thwart it.

And thus the Children's Palace is a replicate, meant for the underage, of that of the reigning raybearer his father (who has adult Eleven, childhood friends of his own) - mock throne room and all.

The Children’s Palace is secure, isolated from the outside world.

We crossed the room to a gilded set of doors behind Olugbade’s Eleven. My hand in hers, we entered a place that made me dizzy from gazing.

“Welcome to the Children’s Palace,” said Mbali. “The happiest place in Ileyoba.”

Sunlight streamed into a high-domed chamber of blue and gold. Rays glinted off a mountain of toys and a menagerie of rideable wooden animals from every Arit realm. Children on zebras and tigers scooted past me, jeering and screaming in chase. Servants in brocade wrappers bustled about, holding fruit trays and water pitchers.

We left Kirah and passed through the brightly painted halls of the Children’s Palace. It was a miniature version of An-Ileyoba’s central wing, Mbali told me, and in one room, the floor was a giant marble checkerboard, where giggling children stood in place of the pieces. In another, dining tables brimmed with oranges, fried plantains, sticky fig cakes, and mountains of treats I couldn’t name. The wing even had a mock throne room—a chamber with mirrored ceilings and twelve child-size thrones. At last, I lingered in a large, airy room with a dais in the center. Murals of long-dead councils glittered overhead, depicted as flower-crowned children, smiling beatifically as they danced in a circle.

“This is the Hall of Dreams,” said Mbali. “You will conduct much of your training here during the day, and sleep here at night.” Rolled sleeping mats lay stacked in neat piles against the walls. Tied‑up mosquito nets hung in gauzy festoons from the ceiling, and embroidered constellations shimmered in silver and blue across the netting. When the nets were let down, they would look like the heavens, tumbling to the bodies of children below.

“At night, a screen separates the boys from the girls. The prince (Ekundayo or Dayo for short) sleeps there, in the middle.” She pointed to the raised platform. “Someday, his council will sleep close beside him.”

Lofty unglazed windows sank into arches along one wall, shielded by white damask curtains, which glowed with sunlight and shuddered in the breeze.

...

To Kirah from Blessid Valley, I gave dreams of her mama and baba, who kissed her cheeks and stroked her hair, and said they weren’t angry about her leaving them. For Kameron, Dayo’s rugged council brother from Mewe, I fabricated a pack of hunting dogs, nipping cheerfully at his ankles as he tracked a boar in the forest. Dreams of blooming roses were for Thérèse from Nontes. Adoring crowds were for Ai Ling from Moreyao, and handsome swains for Theo from Sparti. To Umansa, a blind weaver boy from Nyamba, I gave new patterns for his tapestries, swirling them around him in a brilliant prism. Finally, to hard-faced Emeronya from Biraslov, I gave flurries of sweet-tasting snow and a wizened woman who wrapped her in wool, humming a dissonant lullaby. (Then there's Dhyrmish Sanjeet and Tari from Swana.)

No place made me feel more distant from Dayo than the Children’s Palace throne room. I stood, invisible among the other candidates in the chamber of mirrored ceiling tiles and wax-dyed tapestry. A platform of twelve wooden thrones rose before the candidates. As Dayo, Kirah, and the other Anointed Ones took their elevated seats, I scanned the room for Sanjeet, but the towering pillar of his head and shoulders did not appear.

“By the power of Ray within me,” Dayo began, tapping a plain wooden scepter on the ground, “I declare this court in session. Approach the throne.” He smiled over the crowd, pulling uncertainly at the rings on his fingers. The Children’s Palace acted as a microcosm of An-Ileyoba’s true court, preparing Dayo to make decisions as emperor.

After a murmuring pause, a Djbanti candidate named Zyong’o stepped forward. “I have a complaint, Your Imperial Highness.” Dayo nodded, and Zyong’o bowed, then crossed his arms. “When Djbanti are paired with candidates from Dhyrma, we always lose the timed logic puzzles. They slow us down. I think”—he continued over enraged objections from the Dhyrmish candidates—“I think every member on a team should be from the same realm. Why mix figs with mangoes? Why should we Djbanti, hunters and scholars, be dragged down by empty-headed merchants?”

Dayo winced at the now-unruly crowd. Djbanti and Dhyrmish candidates stood at opposite sides of the throne room, yelling and cursing each other, while Swanian candidates jeered at them both. “Silence?” Dayo said. “Order?” He sounded like a nervous farm boy, tossing seed to quell chickens. Surprisingly, the crowd quieted, though venomous looks still volleyed across the room.

“I am grieved by your complaint, Zyong’o,” Dayo said, choosing each word with care. “I am sure it’s hard to feel that your strengths are compromised. But I doubt your problems are the other candidates’ fault. I’m sure Dhyrmish people are just as smart as anyone.”

I shook my head in admiration of Dayo’s patience. I would have snapped at Zyong’o to either work with his Dhyrmish teammates, or take his haughty rear end all the way back to Djbanti.

Imperial testmakers, the passive men and women who administered most of the candidate trials, stood in crimson robes along the wall. Brightening with an idea, Dayo gestured for a testmaker to approach.

“Lady Adesanya,” he addressed her, “you help keep track of test results, don’t you? Please share how Dhyrmish candidates perform compared to others.”

The testmaker nodded, producing a thick tome from beneath her arm and opening it to the middle. “According to my records,” she droned, “on average, candidates from Dhyrma consistently underperform behind their peers in logic, weapons, and science. They show equal capabilities, however, in god-studies (mythology/theology), griotcraft (history/storytelling/oral literature), and statecraft.”

People from Dhyrma were not stupid. Zyong’o was wrong. But Lady Adesanya had no reason to lie.

Pound, pound.

The Dhyrmish candidates failed at logic, but excelled in statecraft. That made no sense. Something was off: a rent in the pattern.

“The Council of Eleven reflects all realms and social classes. When the Eleven fall, so does the Arit empire. We aren’t just being tested on our skills. We’re supposed to learn how to work together.”

It was the sleeping mats. It had to be.

Candidates from Swana and Djbanti were likely to have names later in the Arit alphabet, while Dhyrmish names occurred earlier. The sleeping mats were arranged by name. Candidates with names that came earlier slept farthest from the doors in the Hall of Dreams, making them last to reach the banquet hall. Running on virtually no food, those candidates would be exhausted for every trial administered before lunch: logic, weapons, and science. God-studies, griotcraft, and statecraft occurred after lunch and supper—so in those trials, they performed well. The solution was so simple, it almost felt silly. Dayo always invited me to eat with his Anointed Ones, and so I had never been affected.


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When the Council of Eleven is complete, the royal's own hallow, inherited from his father and grandfather and so all the way up to Enoba the Perfect... no harm can befall the royal except death from old age and betrayal from at least one of his Eleven; also all twelve people are linked together by empathy and telepathy.

This Council is a group of eleven people, each with a different Hallow, who are connected to the Prince and to each other via the Ray – a magical bond closer than blood. If they are too far from each other, they feel pain; they can telepathically communicate, they can share their feelings, and each Council member also provides a unique magical protection for the Prince. The Ray is said to be a gift from Warlord Fire himself, the god of war and the Sun. Once the Council is fully anointed, the Prince cannot be killed by anyone except a member of that council. The
Council and their king always have each other, as True Companions. It 
is this psychic-heightened unity, more than gold or prestige, that 
attracts many people to the role.
 Also: The final resting place for deceased souls in the Aritsar afterlife is 
the aptly-named Core, a paradise at the very center of the Earth, even 
deeper than the underworld.
 
There are so many great ideas in that premise alone that it would have been enough for a great story, but it doesn’t stop there. The world of Aritsar has even more to offer, both in terms of politics, lore, songs, and history, that there is always something new to discover.

The differently-coloured rays in the crown of the raybearer each represent a region and a way to die that has been averted by making friends with a person of said region. The link formed thus through the royal family hallow also binds all of the Eleven and the Raybearer together for life, bonded for life; otherwise, if any one of them is alone, that person gets the council sickness: "When you’re anointed, the Ray binds your body to the council. So if you ever get separated—or abandon the council—you get sick. Sweating, fever. Eventually you go mad. That’s why no council has ever committed treason. And that’s why the Eleven are always together, touching and kissing like that. If they stay apart for long, they get the sickness.”

“Don’t talk like that,” I said, eyeing the mask warily. Nine stripes colored the obsidian mane of the lion-mask-crown, jewel tones glittering in the moonlight. For each person Dayo anointed, a new colour would appear, representing the immunity that Dayo had gained, in addition to the one with which he was born. Raybearer princes wore the mask around their necks, hiding it always beneath their clothes. They showed it to no one, lest an assassin discover the kinds of death to which they were not yet immune. Only when a Raybearer’s council was complete did he wear the mask openly, displaying his deathless power to all the world.

Three colours were missing from Dayo’s mask—one for a Djbanti candidate, one for Sanjeet, and one for me.

“Orange, purple, and red,” Dayo murmured. “Gluttony, contagion, burning.”

“Shh!” I hissed, slapping his knee. “You want all of Oluwan hearing how to kill you?”

Dayo didn’t answer; instead he stared longer at the mask before replacing it on a gold chain that hung around his neck and slipped it beneath his tunic to rest beside his vial of anointing oil.


Hear the duties of the future emperor’s sacred council: The Eleven must wield their titles of power fairly and without bias. The Eleven must serve the emperor first, then the empire, and then their realms of origin. Outside the council, they must form no attachments. Inside the council, no attachment may outweigh their loyalty to the future emperor. Carnal relations are prohibited, except with the future emperor.

Hear the duties of the future emperor- His Highness is not permitted to marry. Instead, His Highness must anoint and protect a trusted council, through which he shall serve the empire. His Highness must select his council sisters with special care, for they will birth all future Raybearers.

The council positions are High Priest/ess (in charge of liturgy/organised religion), High Lord/Lady General (frontline commander), High Lord/Lady Judge, High Lord/Lady of Castles, High Lord/Lady Ambassador (in charge of interrealm trade), High Lord/Lady Treasurer, High Lord/Lady Archdean (strategist), High Lord/Lady of Harvests, High Lord/Lady of Husbandry (as in animal husbandry), High Lord/Lady Magus (medium who contacts gods and spirits and regulates the practise of sorcery), and High Lord/Lady Laureate (in charge of the creative arts).

“My father’s council has long deliberated over the imperial positions my council will inherit. Today, it is my sincerest pleasure to read their decisions.” Silently, he sent each of us a pulse of affection through the Ray.

Ready? Kirah Ray-spoke, and eleven voices echoed in my head. You’re kidding, right? … Don’t care which one I get … Can’t wait … As long as we finally get to move out of that cramped Children’s Palace …

Dayo cleared his throat and unfurled the scroll. A grin split his face, and so I knew the first name on the list was no surprise. “As her heir apparent to the title of High Priestess,” Dayo said, “Anointed Honor Mbali of Swana has selected Kirah of Blessid Valley.”

The temple rang with cheers, and Kirah stood, hazel eyes shining. “I accept my title as High Priestess Apparent,” she croaked, and glowed as the imperial secretary came forward to place a gold circlet on her brow.

The next declaration was also no surprise. “As heir apparent to the title of High Lord General,” Dayo said, “Anointed Honor Wagundu of Djbanti has selected Sanjeet of Dhyrma.”

Sanjeet stood, accepting his title and circlet without expression. 

Tari of Swana becomes High Lady Judge, and then: 

The rest of the ceremony passed in a blur. A smug Mayazatyl of Quetzala was appointed future High Lady of Castles, head of defense and civil engineering. Ai Ling of Moreyao, Hallowed with formidable powers of persuasion, was appointed future High Lady Ambassador, in charge of interrealm trade. Umansa of Nyamba, who could read vague fortunes in the stars, would be High Lord Treasurer, and Zathulu of Djbanti, with his bookish head for facts, would be a competent High Lord Archdean. Thérèse of Nontes, our Hallowed green thumb, was destined to be High Lady of Harvests; and Kameron of Mewe, who had routinely snuck dubious animal rescues into the Children’s Palace, happily accepted his future as High Lord of Husbandry. Mysterious Emeronya of Biraslov would regulate sorcery as High Lady Magus, and as future High Lord Laureate, bleeding-heart poet Theo of Sparti would curate the art and music of all twelve realms.

When all of us were crowned, I allowed myself to relax. Our exhausting journey of diplomacy was almost over. Dayo would conduct the Peace Ritual with the continent ambassadors. Then our council would whisk away via lodestone to Yorua Keep, with nothing to do but study scrolls, play house, and throw sumptuous parties for decades to come.

Priests swept the four corners of the temple, ritually cleansing the chamber. Dayo, the eleven Arit ambassadors, and a royal emissary from Songland came to stand at the altar. A child choir of acolytes sprinkled myrrh around the marble platform and harmonized in rounds:

Sharp and cold the world received you

Warm with blood it sends you home

Back to earth, to holy black

Dark to dark:

Beginning and beginning.

On the altar rested a gourd flask and an ancient oval shield, which had once belonged to Enoba the Perfect. In one year, the thirteen continent rulers would travel to the capital and spill their blood into the shield’s basin, renewing humankind’s vow with the Underworld to uphold the Redemptor Treaty. In today’s ceremony, the Peace Ritual, Dayo, the ambassadors, and the emissary would spill water instead of blood, a good-faith promise that their realms would participate in the official renewal.

“To beginnings,” cheered the ambassadors as one by one they spilled water into the shield, sealing their commitment. First to approach were the ambassadors from the center realms—Djbanti, Nyamba, and Swana—then those from the north—Mewe, Nontes, and Biraslov. Ambassadors from the south, Blessid Valley, Quetzala, and Sparti, and from the east, Moreyao and Dhyrma, were next in line. Then came the emissary from Songland.

He was a bent old man in a sweeping, high-waisted robe who grimaced as he poured into the shield. “To beginnings,” he wheezed. “Songland shall participate in the Treaty Renewal. May it bring peace to our world. And may the parents of the lost children be comforted.”

The onlookers squirmed uncomfortably. The last words had not been scripted into the ritual, though no one dared chastise the emissary.

The Imperial Guard warriors broke ranks. Instead of manning the cannons that might have saved us all, the panicked men and women scrambled to protect their own kinspeople. Warriors from Nyamba ignored shrieking wounded Spartians to help Nyamban courtiers. Moreyaoese warriors stepped over a bleeding child from Djabanti, ignoring him to help a woman dressed in Moreyao silks. Oluwani commoners, who had found cramped shelter behind upended chairs and tables, hissed away people from Nontes and Dhyrma seeking refuge. As the cannon fire stopped, the beasts wheeled overhead, and then dove.

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Mayazatyl had recently designed the weapons outfitting the temple walls. The sleek cannons were powered by fire, but armed with balls of ice—frozen holy water, stored in chambers deep beneath the temple grounds. The Imperial Guard warriors, burly recruits from all over the empire, formed a chain, passing up ammunition to the warriors manning the cannons. With a crack, the first round ignited, and orbs of splintering ice collided with the flying beasts and hurled six to the ground.

Mayazatyl cheered and warriors roared in response, loading the second round. Then the ammunition line broke as clouds of flies dove for the warriors on the ground. My council tried to escort Dayo to safety, but crowds of screaming courtiers stampeded for the exits, creating a lethal jam. A Djbanti woman cried out in her native language as she was trampled on the ground, causing a Djbanti cannon warrior to turn and look. The cannon misfired, and the ball of ice sailed into a crowd of Nontish emissaries. One fell and did not get up.

“Fool,” screeched a Nontish cannon warrior, seizing the Djbanti warrior by the lapels. “You killed the ambassador!”

“I didn’t mean to,” hyperventilated the other. “I’m sorry, I—”

“Typical of you Djbanti! Lazy head in the clouds, never at your post—”

“Leave my people out of it,” another Djbanti warrior snarled, punching the Nontish man in the jaw.

“No,” Mayazatyl rasped. “No, no. This is not the time …”

“Man your stations,” Sanjeet boomed up at the fisticuffing warriors as they teetered precariously on the wall. “We’re in the middle of a battle! People are dying, you idiots; I said man your—”


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Then the prince and his Eleven, once all of them are anointed, are sent away from court to Yorua Keep; they will only return to the capital in the rare event that the crowned father dies and needs a successor... and form a chaotic, disorganised teenage family in the meantime.

When there’s twelve of us, they send us from the Children's Palace to Yorua Keep, a castle by the ocean. It's a coastal, highly-guarded fortress that houses the Crown Prince's Council. We’ll live there all by ourselves, and train to rule Aritsar, and go on adventures.

In Aritsar, it was bad luck to refer to the death of an emperor. Instead, we said that a deceased emperor had “gone to the village, and would not be returning soon.” Most emperors did not go to the village sooner than eighty years of age, which meant that Dayo could be well into his forties before our council rose to the throne. Until then, we would live at Yorua Keep, the sleepy fortress in coastal Oluwan where all crown princes lived after completing their council. Once the goodwill tour ended, we would move straight there.

...."I’m not supposed to show favoritism to any of Father’s council members. I call them all ‘uncle’ or ‘auntie’—even my mother. It’s best for diplomacy. There are lots of rules here at the Children's Palace, but don’t worry. If you pass the test, we’ll make our own rules. Far away, at Yorua.”

Then our council would whisk away via lodestone to Yorua Keep, with nothing to do but study scrolls, play house, and throw sumptuous parties for decades to come.

......

The freedom of Yorua Keep paralyzed me at first. The old fortress, located on a perennially sunny cliff at the coastal tip of Oluwan, had no trials or testmakers. No drums to make us dance from prayers to meals to lessons. No painted facades, hiding eyes that watched our every failing. Strangely, I missed those eyes. In the weeks after the disaster at Ebujo, freedom had lost its romance for my council.

We crept through the airy, salt-scented halls of Yorua Keep in a whispering huddle, ghosts of our own castle. Shyly, we asked for schedules from our new servants: peasants from the village below our cliff, along with a chef and steward from the palace.

“When should we report to dinner?” Dayo asked the head steward.

The man blinked in confusion. “Your council … reports … to no one, Your Imperial Highness. Meals are at the times you schedule them to be.”

And so week by week, the ghosts of Ebujo began to fade, making way for the numbing addiction of running our own household. Our council reserved mornings for prayer and meditation, and then trained on the beach, conducting drills on sand shaded by palm trees. We bathed in the sea and returned to lunches of roasted fish and palm wine. Then we scattered to our favorite crannies of the keep—always in pairs, to stave off council sickness. We studied for hours, anxious to practice the imperial roles we would someday fill.

Ai Ling and Umansa usually took to the fortress turrets. She yelled diplomacy speeches at the clouds while he wove tapestries on his loom, charting prophetic constellations that only his sightless eyes could see. In the courtyard far below, Kameron kept a caterwauling menagerie, treating beasts for rare diseases as Mayazatyl drew diagrams for weapons and defense towers in the dirt beside him. Thérèse tended her sprawling orchard while Theo plucked chords on his zither, coaxing her plants to grow with griot stories and love poems. Emeronya and Zathulu sealed themselves in one of the keep’s dusty studies, murmuring over scrying glasses and essays by budding Imperial Academy scholars.

I spent most of my days on a shady balcony with Kirah, fretting over my court cases, while she scowled at her theology scrolls. To my disappointment, Sanjeet was often called away, and Dayo joined him, leaving the keep to lead the Imperial Guard on its peace campaigns. When Dayo was home, he had the formidable task of learning all our disciplines. He shadowed us for hours, taking voracious notes during the day and informing his father of his progress with long, formal letters at night. I began to wonder if he ever truly slept. Then again, none of us slept well after Ebujo.

Our favorite distraction came once a month, when peddlers were permitted in the heavily guarded keep courtyard. A glut of luxuries—embroidered wrappers, jewel-studded bangles, roasted kola nuts, and pots of flavored cream—were spread before us in a maze of stalls and blankets. The miniature market was for council members only, and musicians and tumblers entertained us as we shopped and made sizable dents in our generous imperial allowance.

The fortress had twenty pristine bedchambers, and we used every single one for storage. Sleeping separately, after all, meant eight hours apart, and the resulting nausea of council sickness was too steep a price. Instead we slept on the floor of the keep banquet hall, rolling out pallets as we had in the Children’s Palace and snoring together in a sweaty pile.

The banquet hall floor was a mosaic of the Kunleo sun and moons. Prince Dayo lay in the golden center, with the rest of us scattered among the eleven pale orbs. Sheer curtains hung from floor-length, unglazed windows, screening us from the warm night air. As moonlight glowed across the tiles, we could hear the Imperial Guard warriors changing watch and the crash of the Obasi Ocean, churning on rocks hundreds of feet below.

I was fast asleep on my pallet. Thaddace routinely sent me cases from the capital, and today’s collection had been particularly exhausting: everything from village disputes over cattle to housemaids reporting their masters for rape. I frowned into my pallet, burying deeper into the down pillows as a hand jostled my shoulder.

Braiding parties were sacred: No studying was allowed. Once a month, the strict security of Yorua Keep lifted for beauty artisans to visit from the palace. Their deft fingers would comb away our weeks’ worth of tangles, styling our hair in the Oluwan court fashion: hundreds of braids, interwoven with soft wool yarn and burned at the ends so the plaits wouldn’t unravel. The style took hours to complete and lasted for weeks.

 Their expressions remained placid, and hardened yellow wax glistened on their earlobes. Any commoner who waited on the Prince’s Eleven was required to seal their ears so our affairs would remain private.

As Crown Prince, Dayo had the authority to dictate our schedules at the keep, though it was unlike him to wield it.

Two of the Emperor’s Eleven visited Yorua Keep every month, overseeing the studies of the heirs who would replace them.

My sleeping chamber in Yorua Keep scarcely deserved the name. It was used only to store my possessions: my spear, piles of handmade gifts from commoners, and a daunting collection of tunics and wrappers.

Water still beaded on my skin from the keep bathhouse, where my council had freshened up for Nu’ina Eve. In a marble chamber partitioned by gender, we had scrubbed with cocoa ash soap and swum in orchid-scented pools, careful to keep our yarn braids dry. Over a wall, I had heard my council brothers splashing and roughhousing. My ear had tuned to a voice deeper than the others: a laugh that rumbled like thunder across the echoing marble tiles.

I ran agitated fingers over gowns and wrappers. I told myself I wanted to impress villagers at the festival. A future High Lady Judge should be seen at her finest. 

“The wine at the festival is filled with tokens,” I told Emeronya, knowing what it was like to feel left out. “The tokens are shells, bits of bone, things like that. Some are bad, some are good. If you find a good token, you can trade it. A cowrie shell is worth … a favor.”

“Theo wouldn’t kiss you,” Ai Ling informed her. “Last time I checked, he was still writing sappy love poems to farm boys in Yorua Village. Besides, council members can’t trade our cowrie shells. We’re not allowed to fall in love.”

I rubbed my skin with shea until it glowed. Rainbow beads stacked in towers on my arms and neck, in the Swana style. Most Arit fashion mixed elements from all over the empire, but Anointed Ones were encouraged to represent their home realms through their clothing. 

The Nu’ina Eve festivities would be conducted by priests of all four Arit religious sects—including priests of the Ember. I shuddered, steeling myself in advance for copious displays of fire. Unable to extinguish the thought of flames from my mind, I held up a wrapper of red and cardamom yellow. I had designed the pattern myself; the Yorua village women had taught me how to make my own wax-dyed cloth. In the keep courtyard, my council sisters and I spent hours using beeswax to draw patterns on yards of fabric. Once we finished, we plunged the cloth into vats of dye, and then into boiling water. The wax would melt away, leaving our intricate designs behind.

My council had arrived at Yorua Village in a parade of palanquins, guards, and liveried servants. The villagers had welcomed us with drums and palm leaves, flinging the branches across our path as they sang that ancient folk rhyme:

Eleven danced around the throne,

Eleven moons in glory shone,

They shone around the sun.

In return, we had brought food enough to feed the village for a week. We held the festival in an oceanside valley, beneath the glittering black quilt of the Oluwan night sky. The air smelled of cayenne and thrummed with talking drums. Spilled goat’s milk and honeywine ran ruts in the red earth. Rice and pepper stew rose in savory mountains on each table, and children’s faces glowed with grease and cream. My council watched the revelry from cushions on a narrow dais, piled high with the villagers’ gifts of herbs and good-luck carvings. Thaddace and Mbali had their own dais, and after Mbali blessed the Nu’ina festival, acolytes from the temples of Clay, Well, Ember, and Wing began their holy dances.

All four religious sects in Aritsar worshipped the Storyteller, and believed in the basic catechism of creation. But People of the Clay revered Queen Earth above all else. Many lived in rural realms like Swana, Mewe, and Moreyao, and they refused to eat meat and opposed the clearing of jungles and development of settlements. In contrast, People of the Well criticized Earth for her fabled infidelity to Water. Many of these believers lived in coastal realms, like Sparti, Nontes, and Djbanti, seafaring people who discovered islands and continents beyond Aritsar. But the most devoted inhabited the rainforests of Quetzala, praying at lakes and underground rivers. People of the Ember—the most popular religious sect in both Oluwan and Dhyrma—credited Warlord Fire with Earth’s wealth, and showed their gratitude by mining jewels and precious metals, and forging tools and weaponry. Finally, fastidious realms like Biraslov and Blessid Valley appealed to People of the Wing, who worshipped only the Storyteller. They covered their heads, spurned other gods as distractions, and embraced a life of simplicity, piety, and sacrifice.

In the center of the festival, a vast pit gleamed with ominous red light. From within, firebrands and white coals made heat ripples in the crisp night air. Villages dug the pit to represent the Storyteller’s journey to the Underworld. If a reveler found an unlucky token in their honeywine, they were considered cursed until the next Nu’ina festival … unless a champion crossed the pit on their behalf. A single wooden slab lay across the pit’s mouth, making a laughably narrow bridge. It was only for show. Most festivalgoers would sooner brave a year of bad luck than have a friend cross that deadly oven.

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"What’s Enitawa’s Quiver?”

Mayazatyl batted her lashes innocently. “Why, it’s only a tree. With smooth waxy branches that grow straight up, like arms twisting around each other. Warriors used to make their quivers from the wood, because it’s flexible and it sings.” She took another long sip from her chalice, relishing our anticipation. “When the wind blows, the branches hum like flutes. Loud enough to cover up any noises that a pair might make in Enitawa’s shadow.” My sisters giggled nervously. “The tree grows beneath a cliff north of Yorua, barely a mile away. Rocks block the spot from view. Council members have been meeting there for centuries.”

I tried to return to my council’s dais, where my siblings were busy accepting gifts and blessing the village children.

We passed through an arbor of hanging wisteria into the keep garden, lit on either side with more bright torches. The garden gate opened to a sandy incline, tumbling down to the Obasi Ocean.

Night had aged into the indigo hours before dawn. Our feet crunched on white gravel as we passed beneath the wisteria again. Sanjeet was too tall for the arbor; violet petals tumbled down his bare russet shoulders. Somewhere in the dark, an owl cooed. I let my fingers pass over the wisteria vines, and my ears rang with lisps and giggles: the whispered conversations of council siblings long ago. Generations of Anointed Ones had frolicked where I stood, unaware of the eavesdropping branches overhead.

Nestled between orange trees, a wooden shed stood in the shadows, and Thérèse’s herb garden sprawled around it. When healers were unavailable from Yorua Village, Sanjeet, Kirah, and I practiced medicine here, using our Hallows to treat our guards and servants. Sanjeet would scan a patient’s body for ailments, and if the problem was physical, Kirah would attempt poultices or a healing chant. But if the problem was mental, I extracted memories and reshaped them, setting old demons to rest.

The medicine shed was long and narrow, lined with shelves of bottles and bundled herbs. 

“You’re good at this.” I turned my wrist, admiring his handiwork. “Do you ever wish you could be a healer full-time? Instead of training to be High Lord General?”

Sanjeet gripped the edge of the damp stone bench. “Dayo will inherit the Imperial Guard and the entire Army of Twelve Realms. He will need help commanding a force that large.” In the hollow of his chest, sweat glistened from when he had wrestled the shovel from Dayo. “I will be what he needs me to be.”

Several minutes outside Yorua, a mile from the village, to where the Obasi Ocean lapped at the mouth of the valley.

When I arrived, the tide was low, revealing a patchwork of pools that winked with shells and sand dollars. The waves crashed like soft cymbals. Blue sprites hummed in the balmy night, winking.

“Why do we give village elders so much power, anyway? What right do they have to say who you are—who anyone is? It’s a dumb tradition.” 


High Judge Apparents were granted a coming-of-age ceremony called the First Ruling: a way to foster the empire’s confidence in the young new judge. In the palace Imperial Hall, the High Judge Apparent would hear a controversial case, weigh the evidence, and bestow an official ruling. By imperial law, a High Judge Apparent’s First Ruling was irreversible—even by the emperor. Thaddace had written to Yorua Keep, asking that I review court cases backing up the pipeline and pick one to consider for my ruling.

Aritsar will — all in the name of further uniting the twelve realms of Aritsar — succeed in his plan to destroy the cultural practices and products of the realms and foist values and manners considered to be representative of the empire on them. What is more, with the manipulation perpetrated centuries back by Enoba the Perfect, Songland will continue to pay the prize for peace by sacrificing hundreds of its children to the spirits of the Core Underworld as contained in the Redemptor Treaty. This is notwithstanding the fact that Songland does not benefit from the economy of Aritsar.  Having refused to be a part of the empire, it has a trade embargo placed on it, but has also been the only realm producing Redemptor children sacrificed to the Underworld.

 Songland was a poor peninsula nation on the edge of our continent. Their ancestors had refused to recognize Enoba as their ruler—and as a result, the tiny realm was excluded from Aritsar’s bustling trade. A jagged range of mountains cut Songland off from the mainland. Aritsar might have ignored Songland altogether, if not for the Redemptors. Enoba the Perfect had bought peace for our world at a steep price. Every year, three hundred children were sent into the Oruku Breach: the last known entrance to the Underworld. In exchange for this sacrifice, the abiku spirits refrained from ravaging human villages. These children, known as Redemptors, were born with maps on their skin, meant to guide them through the Underworld and back to the realm of the living. Few survived the journey. As a result, some families hid their Redemptor children at birth. But for every missed sacrifice, the spirits would send a horde of beasts and plagues and natural disasters, and even set realms against each other, to raze the continent. 

Redemptors were supposedly born at random, to any race and class. But for some reason, every Redemptor in the last five hundred years had been born in Songland. No one knew why. But guilt-ridden Arits, relieved from the burden of sacrificing their own children, had plenty of theories to help them sleep at night. The Songlanders had offended the Storyteller, they guessed. The Redemptor children were punishment for some historical sin of Songland’s. Or perhaps, Songland was blessed by the Storyteller, and their children were saints, chosen to sacrifice themselves for the greater good. The greater good, of course, was Aritsar.

In addition to power tussle, gender discrimination, oppression of common people, and other themes which the novel touches on...

 Raybearer is woven of multiple plotlines, storylines; there isn’t just one goal, one easy win, one clear and simple battle to be fought. It’s about family, and what that means; it’s about misogyny and tradition, the value of history and the dangers of censorship; it’s about cultural identity versus unification. It’s about the different ways to be strong, and to be good. It’s about idealism and how hard the status quo will work to quash it; it’s about whether it’s right or wrong to let the fires of idealism go out. It’s about believing in your own worth, and demanding the world recognise it; it’s about claiming your personal power and your place. It’s about race and identity, magic and friendship; it’s about so many different kinds of love. It’s about the value of human life, whether that human is a loved one or a stranger, one of your own kind or some other.

Anyway, my favourite hallow would of those from the Songland. They can fly and changed forms. How cool is that?

...

So do People of the Wing,” retorted Kirah, who belonged to the same religious sect as Emeronya. She added, turning an even deeper shade of pink, “Though I’m not going to kiss anyone.” Which of course made Ai Ling and Mayazatyl tease her more.


“The wine at the festival is filled with tokens,” I told Emeronya, knowing what it was like to feel left out. Catching up to the countless opulent traditions of Oluwan life had taken me years. “The tokens are shells, bits of bone, things like that. Some are bad, some are good. If you find a good token, you can trade it. A cowrie shell is worth … a favor.”


“From a lover?” Emeronya asked.


“From anyone you like.” I matched her deadpan tone, wiggling my eyebrows. In spite of herself, Emeronya laughed.


“I wouldn’t trade with a boy,” she said. “Girls are prettier. Except maybe Theo.”


“Theo wouldn’t kiss you,” Ai Ling informed her. “Last time I checked, he was still writing sappy love poems to farm boys in Yorua Village. Besides, council members can’t trade our cowrie shells. We’re not allowed to fall in love.”


“Speak for yourself,” crowed Mayazatyl. “Though what Kameron and I did last Nu’ina Eve wasn’t love exactly …”


“Maya,” I hissed in warning, glancing up at the braiders.


Their expressions remained placid, and hardened yellow wax glistened on their earlobes. Any commoner who waited on the Prince’s Eleven was required to seal their ears so our affairs would remain private.


“They can’t hear us,” said Mayazatyl. “Besides, everyone knows council members aren’t actually celibate. They’ve dallied for centuries. Have you read some of the messages scrawled in the sleeping chambers of Yorua?” She smirked. “Then, of course, there’s Enitawa’s Quiver.” Mayazatyl waited as we watched her, taking a languid sip from her chalice and filing her nails with a small knife.

Mayazatyl batted her lashes innocently. “Why, it’s only a tree. With smooth waxy branches that grow straight up, like arms twisting around each other. Warriors used to make their quivers from the wood, because it’s flexible and it sings.” She took another long sip from her chalice, relishing our anticipation. “When the wind blows, the branches hum like flutes. Loud enough to cover up any noises that a pair might make in Enitawa’s shadow.” My sisters giggled nervously. “The tree grows beneath a cliff north of Yorua, barely a mile away. Rocks block the spot from view. Council members have been meeting there for centuries.”


Kirah’s face went blank, as it always did when she was trying to weigh the moral weight of something. “I know most of you have had dalliances,” she said slowly. “But what about imperial law? People who represent realms can’t be making calf eyes at each other. We’re supposed to be impartial, or our subjects will suspect our rulings of favoritism.”


“Only if they find out,” said Ai Ling. “The point of councils is to prevent war. So if we maintain the empire’s sense of equality, it shouldn’t matter what we do in private.” She flashed a rueful smile—her real one, not the charming dimples she used when giving speeches. “We’re not the saints people think we are.”


“You’re the High Judge Apparent,” Emeronya said, turning to me. “Will you throw us in prison if we have lovers?”


I laughed, but wasn’t sure how to answer. Enforcing the law would be my job, after all. Or at least, I had thought it would be, before my tutoring session with Thaddace. His words colored my vision, making everything murky.


Justice is not about being fair. It is about keeping order.

Thérèse hummed in warning. “If I learned anything from the Nontish court, it is this: What happens in the shadows always comes to light.”


Hours later, the smell of burnt yarn filled my nostrils. My braider held a candle to the tips of my finished plaits, searing the ropelike ends shut one by one. I held my breath, sitting on my hands to keep them from shaking. It’s just a candle flame. Don’t be stupid. It can’t hurt you.


She handed me a mirror. Hundreds of braids spilled over my shoulders, shining with oil and winking with tiny gold accents. I felt beautiful, but—


I tapped the artisan’s ear, asking her to remove the wax. “It’s very tight,” I told her. “My scalp aches.”


The braider raised an eyebrow. “With respect, Anointed Honor, that’s how ladies prefer it in the capital. Not like those unruly edges they sport in the countryside! Think of your title. Oluwan ladies rein every strand into place. Complete control.”


I gazed at myself again, remembering how I had trembled over a candle. A candle. Perhaps I could use some control. “It’s perfect,” I told the braider, smiling, and she bowed smugly. Today was Nu’ina Eve: a festival observing when Am the Pelican fed its blood to Queen Earth, nursing her back to health and creating humankind. It was the only shared holiday of the four major religious sects of Aritsar. That evening, our council would ride in a processional to Yorua Village, where revels would last till dawn.


“The children will need to prepare,” said Mbali. “The braiders have already arrived; that’s why Tarisai is wanted in the garden. She had better go. I’m sure her council sisters cannot gossip properly without her.”

LOOK WHO FINALLY ESCAPED,” KIRAH GREETED me when I arrived in the garden. She patted the cushion next to her and scooted me a chalice of palm wine. The grass was littered with pillows and cosmetic bottles, and the smell of olive oil hung in the air. My council sisters chattered in a circle as braiders sat above them on stools, working fastidiously.

Braiding parties were sacred: No studying was allowed. Once a month, the strict security of Yorua Keep lifted for beauty artisans to visit from the palace. Their deft fingers would comb away our weeks’ worth of tangles, styling our hair in the Oluwan court fashion: hundreds of braids, interwoven with soft wool yarn and burned at the ends so the plaits wouldn’t unravel. The style took hours to complete and lasted for weeks. I sat submissively as my braider tugged and raked my coils with a wide-toothed wooden comb, laying out lengths of richly dyed dark yarn that matched my hair.


“Besides the figs, we’ve got fried chin chin dough. And palm wine,” Ai Ling said, pointing to each platter and smiling mischievously. “I managed to smooth talk the cook. He was saving it for the festival tonight.”


“I do not think the revelers will miss it,” Thérèse said with mock gravity as an artisan braided white yarn into her pale tresses. “Some treats are more intoxicating than palm wine.”


Mayazatyl spit out her drink, chortling. “Twelve realms, Reesy! I’d never expect to hear that from you—”


“I may have been sheltered,” Thérèse said mildly, “but I was not born yesterday. In Nontes, we have Nu’ina Eve festivals too, though we call it Fête du Feu there. I knew what happened when a lady found a rosebud in her wine.”


“In Oluwan, it’s not a rosebud,” said Kirah. “It’s a cowrie shell. Am’s Story, I hope I don’t find one.” She wrinkled her nose. “What would I trade it for?”


“A kiss.” Mayazatyl grinned. “Or something naughty. It’s up to you, priestess.”


Kirah turned pink. Emeronya’s features bent in a confused frown. “You are talking of sex,” she said in her blunt, deadpan way. She was the youngest of our council, barely thirteen. “Is that what Nu’ina Eve is like in Oluwan? A night for being drunk and making babies?”


Ai Ling laughed, patting Emeronya’s knee. “Not just that. Poor Em. Don’t they have holy festivals in Biraslov?”


Emeronya scowled, as she always did at the slightest hint of condescension. “In Biraslov,” she said with a sniff, “People of the Wing celebrate Nu’ina Eve with fasting and a vigil. Am’s gift to Queen Earth was a sacrifice, not a party.”


“Then I’m glad I was born in Quetzala,” snorted Mayazatyl. “People of the Well know how to relax.”

The Nu’ina Eve festivities would be conducted by priests of all four Arit religious sects—including priests of the Ember. I shuddered, steeling myself in advance for copious displays of fire. Unable to extinguish the thought of flames from my mind, I held up a wrapper of red and cardamom yellow. I had designed the pattern myself; the Yorua village women had taught me how to make my own wax-dyed cloth. In the keep courtyard, my council sisters and I spent hours using beeswax to draw patterns on yards of fabric. Once we finished, we plunged the cloth into vats of dye, and then into boiling water. The wax would melt away, leaving our intricate designs behind.

YOU’RE SQUIRMING,” KIRAH YELLED AT ME over the music, elbowing my arm. “You should join in.”


“I don’t dance,” I said uncomfortably. “Leave me alone.”

I was quiet for several moments, letting the downbeat of strings, talking drums, and shaker gourds braid themselves together in my ears. Faintly, I had a vision of standing at a window, watching children as they sang beneath me on a rolling grassland.


But traitors rise and empires fall,


And Sun-Ray-Sun will rule them all,


When all is said-o, all is said


And done-heh, done-heh, done.h, done.

My council had arrived at Yorua Village in a parade of palanquins, guards, and liveried servants. The villagers had welcomed us with drums and palm leaves, flinging the branches across our path as they sang that ancient folk rhyme:


Eleven danced around the throne,


Eleven moons in glory shone,


They shone around the sun.


In return, we had brought food enough to feed the village for a week. We held the festival in an oceanside valley, beneath the glittering black quilt of the Oluwan night sky. The air smelled of cayenne and thrummed with talking drums. Spilled goat’s milk and honeywine ran ruts in the red earth. Rice and pepper stew rose in savory mountains on each table, and children’s faces glowed with grease and cream. My council watched the revelry from cushions on a narrow dais, piled high with the villagers’ gifts of herbs and good-luck carvings. Thaddace and Mbali had their own dais, and after Mbali blessed the Nu’ina festival, acolytes from the temples of Clay, Well, Ember, and Wing began their holy dances.


All four religious sects in Aritsar worshipped the Storyteller, and believed in the basic catechism of creation. But People of the Clay revered Queen Earth above all else. Many lived in rural realms like Swana, Mewe, and Moreyao, and they refused to eat meat and opposed the clearing of jungles and development of cities. In contrast, People of the Well criticized Earth for her fabled infidelity to Water. Many of these believers lived in coastal realms, like Sparti, Nontes, and Djbanti, seafaring people who discovered islands and continents beyond Aritsar. But the most devoted inhabited the rainforests of Quetzala, praying at lakes and underground rivers. People of the Ember—the most popular religious sect in both Oluwan and Dhyrma—credited Warlord Fire with Earth’s wealth, and showed their gratitude by mining jewels and precious metals, and forging tools and weaponry. Finally, fastidious realms like Biraslov and Blessid Valley appealed to People of the Wing, who worshipped only the Pelican Storyteller. They covered their heads, spurned other gods as distractions, and embraced a life of simplicity, piety, and sacrifice.

As the irubo ended to cheers and applause, the musicians struck up a mischievous tune on bells and shaker gourds. Children flocked to the festival clearing and took turns doing the worst dances they could imagine. They pursed their lips and pulled faces as they chanted, Brother-sister do as I do; don’t laugh as I do; don’t laugh as I do … Each child had to copy the leader’s dance without smiling or falling out of step, or else lose the game. My council tried to keep dignified faces, but within minutes our cheeks smarted from laughing. Dayo jumped off the front of our dais, dancing into the circle of children. With mock gravity, he pulsed his hips to the beat, shaping his arms in a tangle of poses.

"Wherever I came from,” I told Kirah as irubo dancers whirled around us, “I think music was forbidden. Whenever I hear a song, it feels like I’m stealing something.”


In the center of the festival, a vast pit gleamed with ominous red light. From within, firebrands and white coals made heat ripples in the crisp night air. Villages dug the pit to represent Am’s journey to the Underworld. If a reveler found an unlucky token in their honeywine, they were considered cursed until the next Nu’ina festival … unless a champion crossed the pit on their behalf. A single wooden slab lay across the pit’s mouth, making a laughably narrow bridge. It was only for show. Most festivalgoers would sooner brave a year of bad luck than have a friend cross that deadly oven.

The village watched, speechless. Then a little boy dared to giggle. Then, an old woman—and in a tidal wave, the crowd was copying their future emperor’s ridiculous dance, helpless with laughter.

The festival drumming tripled in speed, and the acolytes united to dance the irubo: a pantomime of the sacred Pelican flying down to save Queen Earth, piercing its own breast to nurse her. The dancers’ bodies rippled with sweat, chests glistening with crimson paint as they pulsed to the music. They leapt and spun, stretching mantles of feathers across their backs as wings.

I jumped as the pit flared up again. Someone had tossed a bowl of perfumed oil onto the flames, signaling that it was time for the choosing of tokens. Village elders disguised by large wooden masks chanted over vessels of honeywine. The vessels’ tapered necks shielded the tokens inside from sight. One by one, the masked elders called us to dip smooth-handled drinking gourds into the vessels. We were each to drink until we found a token.

Dayo went first, fishing a smooth cocoa bean from his gourd. The token had a well-known meaning: a future bitter and sweet. “That is a token you may trade,” intoned one of the elders. “Shall you keep it, Imperial Highness?”

Dayo’s slender fingers closed around the cacao bean. “Of course,” he said, raising the token above his head and making the traditional speech. “I will swallow bitterness so the lives of my people may be sweet.” The villagers cheered as Dayo chewed the raw bean, and my stomach churned for reasons I could not name. A young village girl crowned Dayo with a wreath of woven grass, and then trembled before him with an unspoken request. 

To be touched by the divine light of a Raybearer, many believed, meant a year of splendid luck.


Thaddace and Mbali claimed their tokens and festival crowns next, then my council siblings, until only Sanjeet and I remained. When I drank from the gourd, something hard clicked against my teeth. I spat the object into my palm.


It was a small sunstone, erupting with fiery light. A small hole had been bored into the gem, as if meant for a chain. The heat of skin seared deep in its memory, along with the pound-pound-pound of a strong, stubborn heart.


The elders seemed confused for a moment, their immense wooden masks bobbing in conference. “Dominance,” one of them intoned at last. “That is the traditional meaning of such a token, as sunstones rest on the brows of Arit emperors. But you are a girl, and so the meaning refers to your proximity to greatness. You shall, perhaps,” said the elder, bowing his head coyly, “bear the fruit of dominance.”

he had walked half a mile from the village, to where the Obasi Ocean lapped at the mouth of the valley.


When I arrived, the tide was low, revealing a patchwork of pools that winked with shells and sand dollars. The waves crashed like soft cymbals. 

WHEN THE PALANQUINS RETURNED TO YORUA Keep, my council siblings were clumsy with honeywine. They slept fully clothed on their pallets, snoring in heaps of jewelry and wax-dyed mantles.


I lay among their sweaty bodies, watching their chests rise and fall. Dayo’s breaths tickled my neck. I listened to the guards change watch as the night grew old.


I waited.


I had promised to wake Sanjeet once the others were asleep. He lay on the edge of the sun-and-stars floor mosaic, backlit by the arched windows. All night, his fingers had searched for mine at the festival, restless and tender. I had teased him into chalice after chalice of honeywine, pretending to drink with him. Now, as he lay across from me in the banquet hall, he Ray-spoke drowsy messages through the dark: Promise you’ll wake me up when it’s time.


told you traveling by lodestone was a bad idea,” Kathleen snapped at Woo In as she emptied my sick bowl out the window. “We should have taken camels. Lodestones are nasty powerful. She’s never been exposed to magic before.”


“She was raised in an invisible manor house,” Woo In pointed out dryly. “She’ll be fine. Besides, from the looks of it, the kid would have been sick however we traveled.”


It was my first time in a mule-and-box—in anything with wheels. After leaving Bhekina House, we had crossed two realms in two weeks. By mule, camel, or river barge, the trip would have taken months. But we had traveled by lodestone: a powerful, hazardous magic that dissolved bodies and reformed them leagues away. Ports were scattered throughout Aritsar, guarded by imperial soldiers. 

After the first lodestone crossing, I had vomited my breakfast onto Kathleen’s boots. The Imperial Guard warriors had warned against traveling by lodestone more than once a month, but Woo In had insisted on two crossings a week.


After the fourth crossing, my left arm vanished.


I had nearly fainted in terror, and the limb flickered a few times before deciding, at last, to return. Woo In had relented then, switching us to a mule-and-box. We endured hours of stiff, dusty travel, stopping only to sleep at mudbrick village inns. I inhaled ginger soup to settle my stomach before collapsing onto a straw bedroll, too exhausted to dream.


Today, the lodestone nausea had finally begun to subside. After retching into the bowl, I felt much better, and I leaned curiously from the mule-and-box window.

We go through the Bush.”


Every Arit realm had a place like the Oluwan Bush. Nyamban people called theirs Shida-Shida. Nontish people, Trou-du-Fae. The Mewish name was most direct: Lost-Soul-Land.


Enoba the Perfect had created the Bushlands by accident. When he united our realms as one continent, the magic had grown new earth. These enchanted lands, scholars theorized, tempered the climate of our vast continent, allowing for fertile ground in landlocked areas that would otherwise be rendered arid. But the land had also plowed over ancient ocean passages to the Underworld, trapping malevolent spirits between this world and the next.


To mortals, Bushland appeared no different than any other savannah or forest. A goatherd could wander from pasture to Bush-pasture without knowing it. Animals were better at sensing the difference, though plenty of cattle, lured by the smell of seductively sweet grass, had vanished overnight. The poor beasts emerged from the Bush several days later, half-starved and eyes white with madness, with fewer limbs—or sometimes more—than they had entered with