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miércoles, 12 de febrero de 2014

HONEY HONEY, HOW IT KILLS ME

Since last post was about The Winter's Tale, I would like to comment on the same Shakespearean play in this post as well. And, since last post dealt with a bear, this post will deal with honey.
The premise: in the kingdom of Bohemia (modern-day Czech Republic), boy meets girl (at harvest festival). He is royalty, while she is a shepherd lass (actually, an estranged royal child, adopted by a peasant family). A courtier is keeping an eye on the young lovers, and thus he informs His Majesty of the upcoming mesalliance. Threats imposed by the Crown on the heroine's relatives, should the fated marriage take place, ensue (in Act IV, Scene 4). The nastiest one of them, in my opinion, is the probable (but never carried out) fate of the Young Shepherd (or Clown), Perdita's foster brother...



who shall be flayed alive; then 'nointed over with
honey, set on the head of a wasp's nest; then stand till he be
three quarters and a dram dead; then recovered again with
aqua-vitae or some other hot infusion; then, raw as he is, and in
the hottest day prognostication proclaims, shall he be set
against a brick wall, the sun looking with a southward eye upon
him,—where he is to behold him with flies blown to death.


Glossary to understand the text 

  • 'nointed: anointed
  • three quarters and a dram dead: comatose, in a deep state of unconsciousness
  • recovered: revived
  • aqua-vitae: brandy (French eau-de-vie) (Norwegian aquavit)
  • hot infusion: distilled liquor
  • prognostication: weather forecasts
  • the sun looking with a southward eye upon him: the youth shall be chained facing south, for the midday sun (at 12:00 AM) to shed its light directly on his body. The bugs would come attracted by the honey, and they may lay their eggs on his searing, blazing frame, where the larvae would certainly hatch. The larvae would gradually consume his flesh from within. Add this to the searing heat and excruciating pain... Could I have some more aqua-vitae?

Reaction of the Clown or Young Shepherd:
Give him (the courtier) gold. Show the inside of the purse to the outside of his hand, and do no more. Remember "flayed alive".

Shakespeare scholars remark that this was a punishment used by Spanish conquistadors on their slaves and on the natives... and also by the SPANISH INQUISITION on HERETICS. Some of the spectators must have shuddered indeed.

The scenario practically writes itself, especially in Thermidor (mid-July through mid-August). Flayed alive and anointed with honey, that nest of wasps --thirsty wasps drawn to sweet drinks, such as the mix of blood, perspiration, and honey-- hanging overhead. When the victim is unconscious, recover to consciousness with strong drink --in the evening or night, I may guess, for a shot of liquor in the middle of a hot summer day makes anyone go out like a light!--. Then, the next day around at twelve or one --here in the Mediterranean, summers are pretty hot, but landlocked Bohemia is not that refreshing in Thermidor either!--, tied to the wall, raw and half-dead, for pregnant female houseflies and horseflies, especially the latter, to lay their eggs in the raw flesh of the heavily sunstruck victim, who must have also been thirsted to death throughout the procedure.


miércoles, 6 de noviembre de 2013

THE RINGSTETTEN SAGA VIII: THE LEIPZIG-FRIEDLAND WINTER

Previously on the Ringstetten Saga:
The late king's lifeless body is discovered, bloodstained and covered in gunshot and stab wounds, amidst a heap of slain Croatians. Liselotte finds an unconscious and freezing Gerhard, whom she takes to the surgeon and tends to herself. A nice draught of brandy (both to quench his thirst and ease his pain) down the lieutenant's throat almost brings him back from a state of near-death, but he will have to rest in bed all winter long, speaking and moving as little as possible, if he wants to survive: the bullet is lodged so deeply in his chest that it can't be taken out. The Leipzig Christmas wedding which Liselotte and he had dreamt of will have to be cancelled: they will marry in spring in the Swedish camp, if the wounded lieutenant survives.
Alois, however, has not been found, dead or alive. For one good reason: he strayed in the fog as well, was struck in the nape of his neck with a sword and suffers from amnesia, and thus he has joined Wallenstein's army as he was swept in the Friedlander's pell-mell retreat. After a brief stay in Leipzig before its fall, the amnesiac sergeant has followed the Wallenstein entourage eastward, into Friedland (the Wallensteins' shire, located in between Saxony and Bohemia). He has learned to know Isabella and Thekla von Wallenstein, His Lordship's wife and child (promoted to heiress after her brother's death), the former a blond and elegant Viennese noblewoman, the latter a raven-haired and reserved damsel who has lived in the shade of her father and brother... and is nowadays disturbed by her many suitors. Once in Friedland, Wallenstein has had the local gallows prepared for executing four colonels and nine subaltern officers for cowardice, as scapegoats for the Lützen-Leipzig debacle. Alois, now raised to the rank of generalissimo's aide-de-camp's orderly (pretty high, isn't it?), has become aware that disobedient peasants and servants, officers, privates, and vassals, are bound to wear a hemp necklace at the pettiest offence (even stealing fruit, or not wearing the Wallensteinian colours, which are scarlet and black). 
The Schloss Friedland chapel and those closest to it have got no bells, whose knell provokes His Lordship, but eunuchs calling from the church towers... Though very few people there are deeply religious. To start with, the Wallensteins and their associates are freethinkers.
However, Friedland is a peaceful shire with public schools in the smallest villages, manufactures (early modern industries), and medical care for the meanest subjects. The currency is a golden coin made in Friedland itself with Wallenstein's profile on it. Everything seems to betray that Wallenstein will take all this to imperial scale once he has dethroned the Kaiser: he is convinced that his reign will be remembered for its goodness and emphasis on welfare. Think of that, of an Enlightened despot born a century ahead of his times!
 In a glass case in a parish church (in Weissenfels, Saxony), the hero of freedom is mourned for by officers, privates, and a heartbroken Queen Eleanor (perchance the saddest of them all).
Eleanor (Desperate): Oh, Gustavus! Darling! Without you, I'm so alone! I wither, helpless, on my own!
With the enbalmed form of her late spouse and with his wounded steed, she invites Hedwig and Liselotte to follow the funeral procession to the royal palace in Nyköping. The blond girl, trying in vain to comfort her queen, declines such a tempting offer: she will follow the Swedish ranks, sure that her beloved Alois is still alive somewhere and that they are destined to meet each other again.
Liselotte declines as well, worried about Gerhard's state of health and having already decided to tend to his wounds. And also because she feels at home on the war front, not being that fond of courtly life.
Gerhard and other few Protestant survivors from the Battle of Lützen spend the winter in Leipzig's famous Auerbach Tavern. Our young lieutenant shares a room with his sister and fiancée, before moving into the estate of Breitenfeld for a quicker recovery (and less scuffles with university students). 
There he mostly spends the days sleeping until the week before Christmas Eve, when he starts reading books and making lace, that both girls sell at the local Christmas Market in Leipzig for profit. He draws the inspiration from the ice crystals on his windowpane, and he also notices that, having drunk too much brandy, his lace patterns resemble his first "cobwebs" of yore... let that be a temperance lesson!
The December celebrations of this trio are modest and cozy (that typically Germanic Gemütlichkeit!): Liselotte and Gerhard receive each a wedding ring and a medal of Gustavus Adolphus for their respective chain necklaces, while the convalescent lieutenant makes wonderful and special lace patterns, laden with love, for their dresses. After New Year, the lace made in that inn room is especially produced upon request of well-to-do Leipzig bourgeois for their tables and decoration.
At Schloss Friedland, the celebrations are far more lavish and baroque, crossing the limits of decency. Alois happens to have made friends with Thekla, though merely like siblings... but they must keep the distances, for His Lordship, drunk on success as he is, is rather protective of his wife's faithfulness and of his daughter's innocence. Thekla is courted by many suitors, three of which are actually a fifth column sent by the Kaiser from Vienna to watch the Duke of Friedland and inform the central government of his moves (though the would-be in-laws are unaware of the youths' agenda). Alois gets promoted to generalissimo's aide-de-camp's ensign, having to share entourage with Ladies Neubrunn and Brandeiss. He also gets to admire Wallenstein, and to learn of the duke's plans to team up with the Swedish regency for overthrowing the German Empire with a meticulously planned coup d'état!
Winter changes into spring once more, and both armies take to the field. But Sweden has lost power since the King's untimely death: the Regent reveals himself as a much worse leader, and Banér, now free once more, has started to drink to drown his sorrows after his beloved liege lord's death at Lützen. Thus, a long and bloody losing streak ensues. Gerhard and Liselotte marry in the woods in spring, while more officers defect to Wallenstein's army following each lost confrontation...

THE RINGSTETTEN SAGA VII: LÜTZEN

Previously on The Ringstetten Saga:
By All Hallows (31-10/1-11), Leipzig, Halle, and the villages in the surrounding area have been taken back by the Imperialists. Eleanor is especially worried about the fate of her spouse, having seen his death on the battlefield in a prophetic dream. Gustavus has received and replied to a letter from his little daughter Christina at Stegeborg. Count Pappenheim, now Wallenstein's Man Friday, is commanding the garrison of Halle an der Saale and quelling an uprising in the local marketplace. Gerhard and Alois, especially our young lieutenant, are worried about the outcome of the upcoming confrontation. Liselotte and Hedwig are also worried, but about the ones they love. And Albrecht von Wallenstein, together with his son and heir Berthold, leaves Schloss Lützen, where the Wallensteins are quartered, for a cold and foggy battlefield... on the eve of battle, the evening before the sixth of November 1632.
From sunrise until about 11:30, a thick and cool morning fog covers the battlefield. On one side, a pale, lean, raven-haired overlord reviews his ranks from a scarlet velvet sedan chair, without saying a word, but casting heart-freezing glares at officers and privates.
Across the swampy plains, his strawberry blond and well-spoken opponent reviews the Protestant army on a nutbrown steed, while singing a song he has written himself in an incredible baritone voice, in Swedish and German. After which the Swedish army repeats the song in chorus (here is the English translation!):


"Do not despair, my little band,
though enemies throughout the land
are seeking to destroy you!
They rejoice, hoping you'll fall soon,
but they will sing another tune,
so keep on brave and coy, you!"

Right before midday, the fog clears like a curtain opening up before a play. And this one will prove one bloody, gory tragedy.


With thunder and lightning, two armies have clashed
at daybreak, one autumn morrow.
Through thick gray fog, gunfire has violently flashed,
stifling the wounded’s cries of sorrow.


On winning, on winning, on daring to dare
is hell-bent the mind of each rider,
though he lose the grip on the reins of his mare,
and rashly dismount, in a stride, her.


As the heavy cuirassier falls to the ground,
the pikeman, who would stand defeated,
sees his chance and thrusts his blade, turning around:
thus, rider and steed are mistreated.

The common soldier rushes into the fray:
his duty reads “dying or slaying”.
The commander watches his men the game play,
and soon heavy cards he’s seen playing.

While Wallenstein stays overlooking the fight in his sedan chair on top of a hill at the edge of the fields (due to his fear of gunshots), Gustavus rides forth into the frontline to encourage his men and keep them from yielding, as bravely as any subaltern officer. Call that foolhardiness or daring-do, whatever you will!

There he rides, his blue plume flutters! Lovely lad!
Cool eyes, every muscle in tension!
The tall, dashing figure in bright doublet clad
draws friends’ and enemies’ attention!


Thus he takes command of his faltering wing,
exposed like a leader of twenty.
Like a young lieutenant, risks takes the blond king:
his sword’s drawn, his scabbard is empty.


He’s shuttled by thunderstorm wings through the ranks,
into the fog, into the fire.
Like hail, many a bullet on a breastplate clanks
where enemy units conspire.

In the early afternoon, the fog returns, blurring the distinction between friend and foe, as gunshots stifle the officers' words of command and screams of pain from the wounded ones.
Gustavus gets lost and finds himself caught in the crossfire, as his men react to his disappearance and the fact that he is already wounded: an Austrian bullet has already pierced and broken His Majesty's left arm, though he does not react to the pain and has already bandaged the wound, using his blue sash as a sling (clever as always!)...

“Onward, my brave Swedish cavalry!
Onward, comrades of German breeding!”
In vain… they can’t catch up… their leader don’t see...
then, suddenly, hear: “The King’s bleeding!”


Into the dark bosom of Wallenstein’s troop
no one the wounded rider followed.
The yellow doublet was, at one fell swoop,
by the clanking iron wave swallowed.

The enemy leader closest to him recognizes such a high-ranking officer, and he doesn't waste any hot lead on such an important target...

A Croatian officer, who follows the King closely on horseback: Long time have I sought you! (He shoots Gustavus in the back. The bullet shatters his right shoulder blade, and then punctures his lung. Gustavus falls unconscious off his steed, to be stabbed thrice by Croatians in the chest and back, and receive three shots to the same region. The first wound in his back brings searing chest pain. The Croatians take his clothes, weapons, and accessories as spoils of war, leaving the Swedish ruler in a bloodstained shirt.)
The Croatian officer: Now he's suffered enough. Let me give him the mercy shot! (He shoots Gustavus in the nape of the neck).

The news of the King's death spreads across the battlefield like wildfire, amidst gunshots and clanking of steel. Enter Count Pappenheim, the leader of the Catholic cavalry, who wanted to challenge Gustavus to a duel (since he knows of a prophecy in which a scar-faced Count of Pappenheim will someday defeat and slay a great Nordic ruler in single combat, and he was born on the same day the same year as Gustavus!). He learns what has happened to Gustavus from a Swedish officer, who shoots him in the chest as he receives a gunshot in the same spot (the left breast) from one of Pappenheim's own riders. This officer is none other than Lieutenant Gerhard von Ringstetten himself. Both the Prussian youth and the Bavarian count are left each with a punctured lung: Gottfried zu Pappenheim "drowns painfully and slowly in his own blood", carried by his orderly Jakob towards Wallenstein's encampment (he will die in the same Leipzig morgue where he coaxed Tilly)... while the young Prussian, seized with searing pain and staggering from blood loss, makes it to the edge of the front near the Swedish garrison, before collapsing, coughing up blood and closing his veiled green eyes, in one of the trenches of the battlefield.
The Swedish army, through the fog and the fire, thirsts for revenge and lunges relentlessy upon Wallenstein's ranks, driving them to flight:

Then, a rising clamour sears flesh and bone:
“Gustavus! Our father! Our leader!”
Thus, his brigades combine: he won’t die alone.
They roar, rushing forward, dear reader.

Croatians retreat and Walloons take to flight,
and, buried in heaps of slain sinners,
the Friedlander’s cannons are hidden from sight:
the martyr’s men shall be the winners.

The last word was missing in his epic song:
the word that crowns every achievement.
The mourners have done their duty, right or wrong:
they wrote it in blood and bereavement.

They’ve won. On the fields, with a lovely parade,
they honour their beloved leader,
but most of them have fallen within the glade:
the living are few, my dear reader.

At the end of the day, the sun sets over a swampy plain littered with lifeless bodies: casualties like Gustavus, Pappenheim, and Berthold von Wallenstein (the Generalissimo's only son) as well as countless unsung officers and privates on both sides of the conflict. "It is cold for the fallen, cold is the fog, but coldest are the hearts of the few survivorsThe Protestants have finally won the battle, but they have lost much more than their liege.
The slain lay, some of them, embracing one another like friends or like brothers, just like at Breitenfeld: Swede and Croat, Saxon and Austrian, reconciled in the afterlife.
The late king's lifeless body is discovered, bloodstained and riddled with gunshot and stab wounds, amidst a heap of slain Croatians. And Sweden's legendary Blue Brigade has dwindled to a dark sergeant (imprisoned and presumed dead) and a fatally injured lieutenant: Liselotte finds an unconscious and freezing Gerhard, whom she gives a drink of brandy from her canteen, takes to the surgeon, and tends to herself. Another nice draught of brandy (both to quench his thirst and ease his pain) down the lieutenant's throat almost brings him back from a state of near-death, but he will have to rest in bed at Breitenfeld all winter long, speaking and moving as little as possible, if he wants to survive: the bullet is lodged so deeply in his chest that it can't be taken out. The Leipzig Christmas wedding which Liselotte and he had dreamt of will have to be cancelled: they will marry in spring in the Swedish camp, if the wounded lieutenant survives.
Alois, however, has not been found, dead or alive. For one good reason: he strayed in the fog as well, was struck in the nape of his neck with a sword and suffers from amnesia, and thus he has joined Wallenstein's army as he was swept in the Friedlander's pell-mell retreat. After a brief stay in Leipzig before its fall, the amnesiac sergeant has followed the Wallenstein entourage eastward, into Friedland (the Wallensteins' shire, located in between Saxony and Bohemia). He has learned to know Isabella and Thekla von Wallenstein, His Lordship's wife and child (promoted to heiress after her brother's death), the former a blond and elegant Viennese noblewoman, the latter a raven-haired and reserved damsel who has lived in the shade of her father and brother... and is nowadays disturbed by her many suitors. Once in the province of Friedland, Wallenstein has had the local gallows prepared for executing four colonels and nine subaltern officers for cowardice, as scapegoats for the Lützen-Leipzig debacle. Alois, now raised to the rank of generalissimo's orderly's orderly's orderly (pretty high, isn't it?), has become aware that disobedient peasants and servants, officers, privates, and vassals, are bound to wear a hemp necklace at the pettiest offence (even stealing fruit, or not wearing the Wallensteinian colours, which are scarlet and black).
The Schloss Friedland chapel and those closest to it have got no bells, whose knell provokes His Lordship, but eunuchs calling from the church towers... Though very few people there are deeply religious. To start with, the Wallensteins and their associates are freethinkers.
 However, Friedland is a peaceful shire with public schools in the smallest villages, manufactures (early modern industries), steelworks, and medical care for the meanest subjects. The currency is a golden coin made in Friedland itself with Wallenstein's profile on one side and his crest on the other. Everything seems to betray that Wallenstein will take all this to imperial scale once he has dethroned the Kaiser: he is convinced that his reign will be remembered for its goodness and emphasis on welfare. Think of that, of an Enlightened despot born a century ahead of his times!
In a glass case in a parish church (in Weissenfels, Saxony), the hero of freedom is mourned for by officers, privates, and a heartbroken Queen Eleanor (perchance the saddest of them all).
Eleanor (Desperate): Oh, Gustavus! Darling! Without you, I'm so alone! I wither, helpless, on my own!
With the enbalmed form of her late spouse, his unusually large enbalmed heart in a golden baroque reliquary, and his wounded steed, she invites Hedwig and Liselotte to follow the funeral procession to the royal palace in Nyköping. The blond girl, trying in vain to comfort her queen, declines such a tempting offer: she will follow the Swedish ranks, sure that her beloved Alois is still alive somewhere and that they are destined to meet each other again. Liselotte declines as well, worried about Gerhard's state of health and having already decided to tend to his wounds. And also because she feels at home on the war front, not being that fond of courtly life.




viernes, 1 de noviembre de 2013

THE RINGSTETTEN SAGA V: TILLY'S LAST STAND

 Previously on The Ringstetten Saga:
Cue Hedwig realizing that she's fallen for Alois (together, they do look like Othello and Desdemona)!
So, when winter changes into spring and the Swedes have designed to march further south into Bavaria, the blond and blue-eyed handmaid leaves her employment in the Queen's household to become a camp follower.
In the meantime, old Count Tilly has recovered from his wounds, but only from those of the flesh. 
Having said his prayers at Our Lady's of Altötting, he has promised the Virgin that he will defeat the leader of the heretics, whom he secretly admires. 
And, being informed that the Swedes are encroaching against his own liege's electorate, he decides to break all the bridges across the Lech (across whitewater rapids, when the glaciers thaw in springtime) and set up, on the right bank, an encampment for himself, his liege Maximilian I, and his closest generals: Pappenheim, Altringer et consortes. The wooden planks from the bridges are re-used for the palisade, while the woods shelter the Catholic headquarters. In late March, right before April Fools' Day, the Protestants show up and encamp on the left bank, across the Leaguers. And Gustavus ironically laughs across the rapids: "We have nothing to fear! What? Are you afraid of crossing this stream!? Shall we, after having crossed the Oder, the Rhine and the Danube, stop before this rill!?""
Wood is being gathered from farmhouses on the western/left bank of the Lech, where the Swedes are encamped. Branches of trees are also being cut in the woods and orchards of the same area. Those branches, along with heaps of sun-dried rushes and ferns, are heaped together in a bonfire near the Swedish palisade. It can't be a campfire: they have already got one, and this bonfire is larger as well as outside the palisade! As Tilly watches the Swedes through his spyglass, he realizes that something is going on across the rapids...
Later on, a suspiciously red-haired and freckled young Leaguesman with a long pole is seen trying to wade across the Lech. It happens to be April Fools' Day. He tricks the Catholic sentries into informing him where he can find a ford and how deep it is by wading into the rapids stark naked, which they do, with the excuse that he wants to ensure that the Swedes don't find it first. Both the Leaguer and the pole-carrying trickster wade into the ice-cold white waters, and the latter observes how deep his "rescuer" has waded. 
As the pretend Leaguer turns his back on the Catholics and enters the Swedish encampment, gun after gun is fired at him, but to no avail. The trickster is revealed to be one of Gerhard's men, a Saxon (from Weissenfels) former Leipzig University Law student, called Kurtius and referred to as Kunz (he joined the Saxon Army upon the fall of Leipzig, and the Swedish ranks after the battle of Breitenfeld), who is rewarded with an ensigncy, filling the vacant slot Rainer’s untimely death left in the Ringstetten Company.
The next day at dusk, after singing "Do Not Despair", the Swedes light the bonfire, which they had previously covered in tar and brandy. A new bridge is erected, behind the smokescreen, by Finns with the wood from the farms (clever one, Gustavus!), as the Swedish cannons are fired at the League's headquarters. The guns on the eastern/right bank soon answer. Catholic units led by Altringer and Pappenheim try to refrain the Swedes from crossing, but many of the the Leaguers fall, and they are forced to retrocede. Altringer is nearly shot dead (he survives), taking General von Tarlenheim with him, then having this great officer (Liselotte's father) fall unconscious off the bridge and into the rapids, along with a dozen slain Catholics... while Pappenheim is once more severely wounded. And then, Tilly himself (desperate after his first defeat at Breitenfeld and the subsequent fall of Leipzig) springs to action, saying what may be his last Hail Mary, crossing himself, and leading his own regiment of Wallonian veterans sword and flag (a Catholic League flag, since he lost the regiment's at Breitenfeld) in hand. In the ensuing chaos, he is shot in the right thigh, just above the knee, and, as he drops the flag, he falls unconscious and bleeding, with a broken leg, off his steed. The Catholics retreat, their wounded generalissimo carried into safety in a litter into the Elector's own carriage (where he comes to), sternly pursued by the Swedes, who have captured the flag.
As for Alois and Gerhard, the dark-haired soldier saves the lieutenant's life on the bridge, and he is soon to be promoted to sergeant.
The now orphaned Liselotte has become a ward of the Swedish Crown.
"If I were the Count of Tilly, even though a cannonball had torn my chin away, I would never leave so good a position!" Gustavus exclaims, tankard to his lips, in the empty right bank League holdfast now occupied by the victorious Protestants.
A couple of weeks later, the Swedes are digging trenches and laying siege to Ingolstadt, where a febrile and suffering Jean de Tilly is breathing his last in the guardhouse guest-room, racked with pain and twitches, his hands trembling and his brow glowing with fever, the whole frame gradually paralyzed throughout his system. That fatal gunshot wound has infected him with lockjaw (tetanus), leaving the old count more rigid for each day, until he will finally die of suffocation within the fortnight. Yet, when the siege has only lasted a few days and the Swedish cannons begin to peal, as he loses his first hopes for life, Jean 't Serclaës, steeling a trembling hand, is still able to write a letter inquiring for the personal surgeon of the King of Sweden, whose skill is surely more advanced, to come up to the commandant's residence and tend to his wounds. The letter is given to Count Friedrich zu Solms to smuggle it past the ramparts and into the Swedish camp, and then handed over to the Swedish colonel Claus von Sperreuter, who, in turn, hands the message over to his liege lord, whom the colonel asks what to do. Within a few seconds of quick reading, His Majesty quickly sends his own surgeon to the commandant's guest-room.
Though the Swedish ruler is younger and injured himself (A cannon from the ramparts has shot down the horse he was riding in both hind legs, giving Gustavus but a few slight bruises as the white Persian mare fell upon him and making him tell the gunner: "This fruit ain't ripe yet!" The mare, by the way, has been put out of her misery by the encampment vet), he has kept his promise, sending his own personal surgeon to tend to the ailing enemy general, whose right femur is revealed to have been completely shattered, and who, in the meantime, as Gustavus is shot down by said cannonball, is breathing his last. As the countless shards of bone are removed one by one from his tainted flesh, the Count of Tilly bravely stands the pain, not even uttering a single whimper, used to injuries as he always has been.
Like I wrote in a later poem:

Ablaze with fever, seized with searing pain,
the old commander now contends with death.
Though he's been wounded many times before,
he can't resist: there is no hope for life.
Tears are shed by both officers and men
as the surgeon, a blond, rosy young gent,
tells them their leader is about to die.
And then he bursts into warm tears himself,
and turns his steps towards the Swedish camp:
he is the surgeon to the King of Swedes,
by his liege to the hold of Ingolstadt
sent, to tend to the wounded Count Tilly.
Gustavus seizes the physician tight,
and decides to mourn such a worthy foe,
while, on his deathbed, in the locked hold,
the elderly commander shuts his eyes,
as blue as the Bavarian skies above,
and, pale as his hair, ceases then to breathe,
lulled into rest for all eternity.

Here, the death of the Catholic generalissimo is most accurately described: he is haunted by his many war crimes and confronted with the consequences of his "well-intended" massacres (through the meaning of the parable of the Pharisee and the Tax Collector). 
As his life unfolds before his eyes, we find out about his childhood: a happy story of two brothers sparring with wooden swords that takes an unexpected turn. It starts in a château on a plain where lindens grow, over sixty years before his demise...
In the late sixteenth century, the Count and Countess of Tilly, Martin and Dorothée 't Serclaës, lived at their château in southern Wallonia, in the shire of Tilly ("Lindenshire", from the French tilleul), with the two children they had had there, two boys called Jacques and Jean, the former mrore active and the latter more reserved. Though they were devout Catholics, they couldn't bear the cruelties of the Inquisition in nearby Flanders and the rest of the Low Countries. So they wrote letters to their liege lord King Philip II of Spain, and to the governor of their province, the Duke of Alba, also known as the Iron Duke, pleading to dissolve the Holy Office, or at least to lighten its punishments.
How high the longing for liberty was
surging in the Netherland nation, and with how fierce a glow hatred of
the Spanish tyrants was consuming the hearts of the people.

But everyone would also have heard
of the atrocities that threatened the provinces.


Even furious foes of Spain desired to see a
power which could be relied upon at the head of the community, even
though it were a tool of the abhorred King. The danger was so terrible
that it could not fail to alarm and summon to the common defence every
individual, no matter to what party he might belong; for the unpaid
Spanish regiments, with unbridled violence, rioting and seeking booty,
capable of every crime, every shameful deed, obedient only to their own
savage impulses, were already entering Brabant.

Now many a Spanish partisan also hoped for deliverance from the Prince of
Orange, but he took advantage of the favour of circumstances in behalf of
the great cause of liberty. Soon the "Spanish" party in the Low Countries heard that
all the heads of the royalist party who were at the helm of government
had been captured, that province after province had revolted, and would
no longer bow to the despot. Philip of Croy, Duke of Aerschot, had been
appointed military governor of Brabant.
Since they were members of the landed gentry and not courtiers, the lord and lady of Château Tilly believed they were safe from the wrath of the Crown. However, the arrival of the Iron Duke's soldiers at their very garden gate startled them one stormy day. They brought the lord's and lady's official sentence to exile. Countess Dorothée pleaded to save her life and that of her husband in exchange for their beloved children. And thus, both ten-year-old Jean and slightly older Jacques were spirited away to the Jesuit college of Châtelet. The Society of Jesus lectured them to defend Catholicism, as the only true faith, against its enemies. When Jacques had come of age, he joined the Spanish tercios of the Iron Duke in the war against the Flemish and Dutch Protestant freedom fighters. His younger brother Jean, who had previously intended to become a priest in the Jesuit order, read Jacques's letters and that their parents were safe and back at the ancestral château, and thus, deciding to fight for a good cause, he received a sword and breastplate of Spanish steel and a green doublet from his brother, casting the black robe aside, but keeping the rosary close to his heart. Jacques welcomed him into the tercios, and they fought the Insurrection of Orange together. 
Though his despisal of strong drink and female company had given Jean ‘t Serclaës the reputation of a curmudgeon ever since he enlisted, he stayed true to his duty, scorning material rewards as he served generations of Habsburgs in the Low Countries, Lorraine, Hungary, and the crownlands and vassal states of the German Realm.
At 40, during a repression in Hungary, then Colonel Jean de Tilly met one Ensign Albrecht von Waldstein, from the Kingdom of Bohemia, aged barely twenty. This clever young officer with raven hair and piercing black eyes is the one who caused his downfall, and he's always been a rival to the Walloon. Now Albrecht is Gustavus's age, he has risen the highest an officer can through the ranks, and his surname is Wallenstein... Tilly thinks that, after all, he is old-fashioned and Wallenstein would make a better leader.
The old veteran has learned at Breitenfeld that he was meant to fall and to lose to a younger, more open-minded opponent. And that act of kindness provided by Gustavus makes him reflect on the Swedish ruler's character contrasted with his own. He tells the surgeon: "Your liege is truly a noble knight!"
Jean 't Serclaës is no longer confused as he had been since the Swedish ranks had tarnished his reputation.
”I hope for you, my Lord. Do not confuse me for eternity", he had said, before returning to the battlefield, that spring of 1632, at his favourite shrine. That day when he also said that prayer in the same shrine by the linden. The prayer about his impending death.
Upon recovering from his wounds earlier on in springtime, a broken Count of Tilly visited the shrine of Our Lady of Altötting, the chapel with the Virgin on his regiment's flag, and, his eyes fixed on the lindenwood Madonna, his knees bent and his rapier lowered before her, he said a prayer to the one he loves: "Grant me, when the darkest hour of separation comes, that on Bavarian ground the sun will shine for the last time upon me!"
Though Jean 't Serclaës de Tilly, withstanding the excruciating pain like only he can, has completely lost self-confidence and he feels that the end is near, he keeps on advising Elector Maximilian: "Hold Regensburg, and if it should fall, flee abroad! Hold Regensburg! Regensburg!" Then, the old Walloon makes an effort and kisses his rosary, his hand drops holding it, he shuts his eyes and stops breathing, as his rapier, that hangs from the wall, falls to the ground. The clank of Spanish steel in utter darkness, among the tears and sobs of his officers, is the last impression he receives in seventy-three long years.
The little he has got is bequeathed to his heir, his eldest (born middle) nephew Werner, who is one of his closest generals, whom he blessed by taking his hand, and to his generals, a brokenhearted Pappenheim included. The calm general has never hurt the feelings his closest lieutenant, who owes him his career, by telling Gottfried about what the latter has brought: Jean de Tilly valued his own glory less than that of his younger and more fiery second-in-command. Tears are shed by all of his officers: from Anholt, Lindeloo, Witzleben, Ruepp, and all the other old friends, the silver-haired Walloons, to the Count of Pappenheim and the Elector of Bavaria, to young Werner the heir himself... Everyone in the sickroom receives, one by one, the dying veteran's blessing.
The Swedes do show their emotions at the funeral, as the Requiem and Dies irae are chanted, when the deceased generalissimo is to be conveyed to his favourite chapel of Altötting: the church on the Tillyan regiment's flagThe prayer he made to the Virgin Mary to die in Bavaria has come true, and the shrine which will be his eternal resting place is located in the same electorate. The old warrior will forever stay by the miracle-working lindenwood Madonna to which he had always prayed and whom he had always trusted.
Even Gustavus himself is shedding tears: "Alas! The honorable old Tilly is no more!"
The inscription on his leaden coffin, with a glass lid for his embalmed features to be seen, will read (in Latin): IN ETERNAL MEMORY HE WAS RIGHTEOUS; HE DID NOT FEAR AN EVIL REPUTATION.
After sparing Ingolstadt due to the old enemy leader's death and giving the garrison the skin of the white mare, the Protestant army then captures Regensburg, the Elector flees subsequently abroad, and soon the whole Electorate of Bavaria, its capital and all, is at the Swedes' feet, and Austria before them.
The Kaiser has no other choice than playing a wild card: a younger and more open-minded, but dangerously wealthy and clever commander. Guess his surname!