lunes, 11 de noviembre de 2013

THE RINGSTETTEN SAGA XI: THE LESSER OF TWO EVILS

Gerhard and Alois join the French military, with Liselotte and Hedwig in tow as camp followers. At first, the leader is skeptic (France is Catholic, even ruled by a cardinal!), but then he learns that France is on Sweden's side against the Habsburgs for reasons other than religious (Bourbon-Habsburg power play). Liselotte discovers that she is with child, while Hedwig and Alois doubt if Gerhard will give them permission to marry in a Catholic ceremony. Furthermore, being a born Spanish subject and hell-bent French hater, the dark-haired veteran gets a massive identity crisis.
In the French encampment, Gerhard and Alois are treated like legends, having known Gustavus Adolphus and his worthy opponents. A young lieutenant by the name of René Charles Devaux (who happens to have left his homelands in the Loire Valley and a fiancée, Yvonne, from another feudal dynasty in the same area: they're childhood friends), passionate about everything surrounding Gustavus Adolphus, is fascinated by the former marauders' exploits, having been told such true stories (Breitenfeld, the crossing of the Lech) by Gerhard beside the campfire. Though he finds it absurd that Swedish officers learn how to make lace... For him, needlework is feminine.
René Devaux would rather fight in the ongoing war that killed his father than study at a university as his mother Estelle and older sisters have planned. He wants also to show Yvonne that he is a grown man and able to defend himself. René, sixteen going on seventeen, is always accompanied by his older Basque sergeant, the scarred veteran Koldo Tellagorri, to whose warnings of caution he never listens, no matter how endangered his life might be...
Now, having finally come of age, new challenges and decisions await our leading cast: first, there's the betrothal issue with Hedwig and Alois. Then, Liselotte falls ill one autumn evening, after her eldest son Karl Hermann (named after her own late father) is born. She may heal if given to drink from a certain spring consecrated to the Virgin Mary, beside a Catholic shrine. Though Gerhard proves skeptical at first, he finally considers his loyalty to Sweden the lesser of the two evils (having got to fight for a Catholic nation, but against the Habsburgs) and saves his spouse's life with the sacred draught.
Soon, word spreads around France that both the Cardinal and the King (Richelieu and Louis XIII) are deceased, leaving a widowed Queen Anne in charge of the regency and her sucessor, Louis XIV, still a young child.
They also learn that Johan Banér, the Swedish general, has died of cirrhosis, due to his ethylic addiction, not far from Lützen, and that a once more free Torstensson is the new commander of the Swedish Army.
That winter, in the Loire Valley, a double wedding takes place in a local church: René and Yvonne, as well as Alois and Hedwig, right before Christmas. They are garrisoned in Yvonne's family estate, where they celebrate a French Catholic winter holiday.
In spring, the young lieutenant says farewell to his betrothed, and Hedwig starts to fear that she may be with child: she states she is "too young". 
The Royal French Army is on a winning streak: on the 19th of May 1643, they defeat the Castilian Habsburg tercios at Rocroi, on a slightly wooded plain in eastern France. It is a landslide victory, a Gallic Breitenfeld (the Habsburgs lose due to obsolete tactics and weaponry once more), eagles (Habsburg flags) are captured by the dozen, and so are prisoners, which are soon sent away up north. When the camp is scoured after the battle, the spoils of these Tercios are comparable to those captured at Breitenfeld. However, the sight of tercios has made Alois think of his comrades fallen on the plains near Leipzig, and he needs to get cheered up during the victory celebrations.
Sadly, René is shuttled back to the encampment, wounded in the right side, with a punctured lung. He is conveyed from the war front back to the chateau, where the surgeon is as skeptical of his recovery as another surgeon has been in Gerhard’s case and his young spouse tends to his wounds. The rest of the French officer class fears that he may die. And so do his good old sergeant and his lovely bride.
As the French beat up the Habsburgs on the front, René attempts to return into the fray by moonlight. He doesn't go too far: he is struck by searing pain and falls to the ground. Yvonne's maidservants discover his lifeless body in the garden, beneath a trellis of crimson roses. The young lady is about to give the instructions for his funeral, and the whole shire is in mourning, when Yvonne notices that the lieutenant's heart is still faintly beating, and he has slightly quivered. So, René has got to lay in bed some more. He sleeps soundly and drinks heartily, having learned his lesson. And he even starts to make some lace!
In winter, Alois and Gerhard show up once more with their unit, their wives and three children (Karl Hermann and Elsa, as well as Hedwig's so far only child Eleonora) to garrison at the young couple's place once more. Having dislocated his right shoulder when he collapsed beneath the trellis, the young Frenchman can't return to the war front a disabled officer, deciding to stay in his homeland with his spouse plus best friend.
On the other hand, Tellagorri, who lost his right hand at Rocroi, is determined to become Gerhard’s servant… after having told the Ringstettens a secret in private, a secret that they won’t tell anyone on behalf of the sergeant’s life: he was actually in unrequited love with his lieutenant, to whom he says farewell with a passionate kiss before joining the Ringstetten-Tarlenheim entourage.
Having heard Koldo explain that Queen Christina of Sweden, who has meanwhile come of age, is seeking peace... our heroes wonder what will happen next. Unlike René and Yvonne, they have nowhere to go, and more children for each year. Luckily, due to Cromwell's persecution of entertainers, a new kind of business is growing big in France...

1 comentario:

  1. Paudel: SXI- Here, I have a suggestion. Pardon for my rudeness. If you had replaced Charles and Yvonne with Gerhard and Lislotte or even Alois’ couple, the story would have been more moving. I don’t mean to say it’s not appropriate but still they were from the very first of the story and if you had given the role to them, we could have had more insights of our heroes and heroines. I understand you created it to give more role to Charles and Yvonne, but it was okay if they weren’t introduced because the tale was already marvelous. (Entirely my personal opinion)

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