tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7110965700181855162.post488224433700121268..comments2024-01-23T10:00:58.992-08:00Comments on MISS DERMARK'S LITERARY RAMBLES: DIE UPON A KISS - ACT IIISandrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02212364704865028073noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7110965700181855162.post-31811247058548842232017-06-11T08:45:39.928-07:002017-06-11T08:45:39.928-07:00Très prenantTrès prenantMarina Ka-Faihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17137592294306531632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7110965700181855162.post-29331994136077558912015-02-20T01:47:55.717-08:002015-02-20T01:47:55.717-08:00Comments on the verses
These slight disappointmen...Comments on the verses<br /><br />These slight disappointments are sent to prepare<br /> For what may hereafter befall; <br />For seasons of real disappointment and care, <br /> Which commonly happen to all.<br /><br />This kind of sets off the tone for the climax. <br />Once more, the right verses for the right chapter... and lovely verses at that, with words of wisdom woven into them ;*<br />In the previous chapter, there has been a slight disappointment (demotion) and now comes a REAL disappointment, the Darkest Hour that comes when the important person falls for the traitor's deception. There is a heck of a difference between the two scenarios ;*Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12266987733693424066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7110965700181855162.post-81112636810214467122014-09-28T14:58:23.277-07:002014-09-28T14:58:23.277-07:00Nice hook ;* like always. This appears to be pract...Nice hook ;* like always. This appears to be practice for the Countess of Toggenburg...<br />Fine portrayal of outpost life and world-building ;*<br />Some good domestic violence... ;*<br />And the first persuasion banter sounded like "Nudge nudge wink wink", that Python sketch with Palin as a student and Chapman as a gentleman (seen it? I think you've been inspired, and you love MP).<br />The handkerchief pops up and changes ownership ;*<br />And another of your clinging hooks ;* !!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12266987733693424066noreply@blogger.com